Review Detail of Nattychris_22 in His Introvert Wife

This actually a pretty good romance story, I can almost feel it at the first chapter. It's light and very fun to read. I can say that this story has a potential, just need to be polished. There are some points that the author need to keep in mind like grammar. There are some paragraphs that I noticed were written in past tense and some were in present tense. My suggestion is the author need to stick which one you want to tell the readers. Just choose one. Other than that, this story is beautiful. Keep up the good work! Fighting!!