Nattychris_22
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Writing is to explore my imagination and share the excitement đ More arts and memes at ig: nc_books Join discord: https://discord.gg/PZecdEmKUE
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Nattychris_222yrCommentedCh 1 King of Hell and Human Intruder 1 ć- Nattychris_222yrCommentedCh 1 King of Hell and Human Intruder 1 ć
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- Nattychris_222yrCommented"Burn the witches!"
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*I had been a great doctor...* New paragraph wud be better
I furrowed my brows as I replied, "All my life, I had done nothing but save lives as a doctor. Was that not enough?" i had been a great doctor and neurosurgeon in this life, how had i not earned good deeds form it. - Nattychris_222yrCommented
omit (she replied and shook her head) at the end of paragraph
The girl laughed eerily as she shook her head, "you are asking for two wishes for my child, but you have saved only one life." she replied and then shook her head. - Nattychris_222yrCommented
looked like a dream*.* There's no way... even if it was a joke*;* my destiny was playing at me. I...
"Then keep my memory intact for past life.'' I added, though all this looked like a dream, there was no way it could be real but even if it was just a joke, my destiny was playing on me, I did not want to give up the chance of returning. - Nattychris_222yrCommented
." *She* asked like a mother *questioning*...
"You have learnt your lesson well, my child, but what if you still fell in the trap of time and repeated your mistakes." she asked as if a mother asked the kid who had done nothing but mistakes all the time. - Nattychris_222yrCommented
My brother *was stabbed to death for my sake*.... I had," ... (add comma after had)
"I have lived a happy life here, but the guilt never left me, my young sister was just 12 years old when she died because of me. My brother took the attack of the sword to save me. I want to save them to repay the debt I had ``I told her as tears started flowing from my eyes, but instead of feeling my pain she smiled. - Nattychris_222yrCommented
"So, etc, etc...?" she smiled, smiling. As her hand touched my face, it felt... *probably wud do better, ig* đ
The girl smiled, "so, you don't want to save yourself from this death." she asked, putting a hand on my cheek. It was colder than ice and I shivered. - Nattychris_222yrCommented
that lucky. The truck
My eyes widened when I saw a fast truck coming towards her. No matter how much I hate kids, I could not see one dying in front of me. So i ran faster only to push her away at the end moment, but i was not that lucky, the truck hit me straight and i end up flying in the air only to get hit by a tree at the side, - Nattychris_222yrCommented
All "i" caps
My eyes widened when I saw a fast truck coming towards her. No matter how much I hate kids, I could not see one dying in front of me. So i ran faster only to push her away at the end moment, but i was not that lucky, the truck hit me straight and i end up flying in the air only to get hit by a tree at the side, - Nattychris_222yrCommented
missing comma after there
"Hey, don't run there" I shouted again, as she walked towards the main road, where vehicles were running at faster speed. - Nattychris_222yrCommentedCh 153 Sister-zoned?