Review Detail of xiaohai_23 in Endbringer
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The story is well written and planned, I can tell you know where you want it to go. I'd suggest splitting the chapters into more pieces (you can call them like chap1-title (1), chap1-title (2) and so on, and even publish them all together) just to help the readers. I like shorter chapters because sometimes I read on the bus, subway or when I have just five minutes. However, it's a choice for the author, so I guess you have your reasons to keep them together. Essentially, good job!
Endbringer
Shionokami
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Thanks, it makes me happy that you liked it, as for the chapters lenght, it was way worse when I started publishing, for example the first 10 chapters were actually just 6 chapters, after some editing and whatnot, it got a little better, as of now the latest chapters are not as long and they only get bigger if needed. But once again, it really makes me happy that you liked it, and I shall keep all the advices that I get in mind, as it helps a lot!
The one about chapter length is not a critic of the story, just a piece of advice to keep your readers. It's because of the media we're using :)
Shionokami:Thanks, it makes me happy that you liked it, as for the chapters lenght, it was way worse when I started publishing, for example the first 10 chapters were actually just 6 chapters, after some editing and whatnot, it got a little better, as of now the latest chapters are not as long and they only get bigger if needed. But once again, it really makes me happy that you liked it, and I shall keep all the advices that I get in mind, as it helps a lot!