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Garang_Kuol
Garang_KuolLv13yrGarang_Kuol

Kinda weird how the author made him madara’s grandson even thought he’s in shusuis generation, considering that tsunade is hashirama’s grand daughter and she’s an ***** in the series already and Madara had to leave the village pretty you so he definitely wouldn’t have a grandson in the third hokages era, probably before the second war would be when he would have a grandson. I would also like to say that the plot of his parents instantly dying and it being danzo’s fault doesn’t add anything to the story since he would already have to deal with danzo because of his hate of the uchiha, in fact it would have been better to make them a positive driving force to give him purpose. The author also didn’t do any decent world building like it would have been cool to put the character in an era where there wasn’t too much preset data about and created his own parallel universe of Naruto but instead, it feels like he just leaches of the original Naruto story without adding on to it and then just polluting it.

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Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

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Garang_Kuol
Garang_KuolLv1Garang_Kuol

I don’t know why it censored -*****-

Garang_Kuol
Garang_KuolLv1Garang_Kuol

It censored edult for some reason

ForgottenLife
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If you see the plot Madara left the village at the age of 40 just before the First Shinobi War. Tsunade was born already. So, Hashirama became a grandfather at the age of 40 which makes less sense if you add up their age. As for killing his parents, I haven't done that. And I am sure most of my story is way before the canon of Naruto. Every fan-fic leech off Original, that's why it is a fan-fic, not a Original novel.