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Garang_Kuol

Garang_Kuol

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2019-11-15 JoinedUnited States
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  • Garang_Kuol
    Garang_Kuol1yr
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    Dudes 100% deleting bad reviews, the story starts out good, but the author is stubborn and keeps writing himself into a corner, also the author strips the Mc of any likability. I know he’s trying to be different, but would you eat grass flavored ice cream just because it’s a new flavor.

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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Garang_Kuol
    Garang_Kuol3yr
    Posted

    The author deletes reviews. And I truly believe they did a terrible job with meshing the world together. . . .

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    Peak Human In An Anime World
    Others · DevourerOfBooks
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  • Garang_Kuol
    Garang_Kuol3yr
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    It’s an okay story overall but I don’t really like the MC that much I get it the authors trying to show him as some unhinged and broken person trying to be analytical and trying to convince himself things by having him talk to himself but in the later part the entire thing becomes like 60% just monologue and exposition, and that would be okay if it wasn’t so redundant and so often. It’s like ‘I WILL BE IMMORTAL’ or ‘I WILL BE A GOD’ or something like that or something long drawn out drivel defending his actions by basically saying he is a sociopath so he doesn’t care. His process of thought and justifications have already been shown they don’t need to be expressed in every odd chapter.

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    Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)
    Anime & Comics · HolyJoker
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  • Garang_Kuol
    Garang_Kuol3yr
    Replied to Garang_Kuol

    It censored edult for some reason

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    Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
    Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
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  • Garang_Kuol
    Garang_Kuol3yr
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    I don’t know why it censored -*****-

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    Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
    Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
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  • Garang_Kuol
    Garang_Kuol3yr
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    Kinda weird how the author made him madara’s grandson even thought he’s in shusuis generation, considering that tsunade is hashirama’s grand daughter and she’s an ***** in the series already and Madara had to leave the village pretty you so he definitely wouldn’t have a grandson in the third hokages era, probably before the second war would be when he would have a grandson. I would also like to say that the plot of his parents instantly dying and it being danzo’s fault doesn’t add anything to the story since he would already have to deal with danzo because of his hate of the uchiha, in fact it would have been better to make them a positive driving force to give him purpose. The author also didn’t do any decent world building like it would have been cool to put the character in an era where there wasn’t too much preset data about and created his own parallel universe of Naruto but instead, it feels like he just leaches of the original Naruto story without adding on to it and then just polluting it.

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    Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
    Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
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