I liked it at first, but MC never uses his future knowledge, just a bunch of things, and he barely interferes with the story, and it's a coincidence, in my opinion, it's better to remove his future knowledge, and he didn't read Naruto previously, he just heard a little about it, and the other thing is to remove the element of chaos, time, darkness and light. There is no need for them, and there is a question of blood strains. It is clear that it is related to the blood strain. You cannot make mc can copy it just by looking at it. I liked it at first, but McT never uses his future knowledge, just a bunch of things, and he barely interferes with the story, and it's a coincidence, in my opinion, it's better to remove his future knowledge, and he didn't read Naruto previously, he just heard a little about it, and the other thing is to remove the element of chaos, time, darkness and light. There is no need for them, and there is a question of blood strains. It is clear that it is related to the blood strain. You cannot make mc can copy it just by looking at it until he managedI liked it at first, but MC never uses his future knowledge, just a bunch of things, and he barely interferes with the story, and it is by chance, in my opinion, it is better to remove his future knowledge, and he did not read Naruto previously, he only heard a little about it, and the other thing is to remove the element of chaos, time, darkness and light. There is no need for them, and there is a question of blood strains. It is clear that it is related to the blood strain. You cannot make mc can copy it just by looking at it, even Madara I liked it at first, but MC never uses his future knowledge, just a bunch of things, and he barely interferes with the story, and it's a coincidence. In my opinion, it's better to remove his future knowledge. And that he didn't read Naruto previously, he just heard a little about it. And the other thing is to remove the element of chaos, time, darkness and light. There is no need for them, and there is a question of blood strains. It is clear that it is related to the blood strain. You cannot make mc can copy it just by looking at it. Even Madara is notI liked it at first, but MC never uses his future knowledge, just a bunch of things, and he barely interferes with the story, and it's a coincidence, in my opinion, it's better to remove his future knowledge, and he didn't read Naruto previously, he just heard a little about it, and the other thing is to remove the element of chaos, time, darkness and light. There is no need for them, and there is a question of blood strains. It is clear that it is related to the blood strain. You can't make mc can copy it just by looking at it. Even Madara couldn't. I liked it at first, but MC never uses his future knowledge, just a bunch of things, and he barely interferes with the story, and it's a coincidence, in my opinion, it's better to remove his future knowledge, and he didn't read Naruto previously, he just heard a little about it, and the other thing is to remove the element of chaos, time, darkness and light. There is no need for them, and there is a question of blood strains. It's obviously related to the blood strain. You can't make mc can copy it just by looking at it. Even Madara couldn't.
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