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2020-08-21 16:46

Hmmm can't really write a review since I'm bad at describing things but I'll try. Well let's see, grammar, its ok, I don't have any problems with it. Update, well its stable so that's good. Story development, I don't know since I can't think of anything to say to this. Characters, they're not emotionless puppets so that's good. World background, the author I guess knows it so its good

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DeadBeatWeebLv4

You didn't say anything really, so that GIF isn't appropriate

killersoulLv13

eh he basically said it wasn't bad he paragraph basically said meh give it a try yourself

DeadBeatWeeb:You didn't say anything really, so that GIF isn't appropriate
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