Item: Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
Rating: 4
Author: Dr_Absent_Minded

Dr_Absent_MindedLv144yr

2020-08-14 20:58

sorry to burst your bubble bro it does exist but i still gave you a 4star review without even reading it because maybe you will take it as an inspiration and make a better one than the one below https://***.fanfiction.net/s/9172570/1/Legacy

Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

ForgottenLife

4.6

666 Chs

Liked by 18 people

Replies7

ForgottenLifeAuthor

I am thankful that you made me aware of the fan-fic and I checked it out. But the fan-fic is about Minato being the son of Madara. So , it is an entirely different story. I hope you give me a honest review after reading the story so far.

4yr

Deeq8Lv4

If there was people like you out there WBN would’ve been better place

4yr

DragonkingKyoLv6

is this a harem? or romance? if so is Tsunade the love interest(or a harem member if it is a harem)(is it even in Tsunade's generation)

ForgottenLife:I am thankful that you made me aware of the fan-fic and I checked it out. But the fan-fic is about Minato being the son of Madara. So , it is an entirely different story. I hope you give me a honest review after reading the story so far.

4yr

HokonosoLv13

There are tons of naruto with madara genes, that isn't' new. but very few stories with a lineage of madara that is an OC. though i've seen probably 10-15 of these stories, i mean there are over 400k stories on fanfiction.net, whatever you are thinking of making is already made, but searching for it is impossible on that horrible site.

4yr

OtakuReverenceLv14

You whats funny half the **** in fanfiction.Net is naruto

Hokonoso:There are tons of naruto with madara genes, that isn't' new. but very few stories with a lineage of madara that is an OC. though i've seen probably 10-15 of these stories, i mean there are over 400k stories on fanfiction.net, whatever you are thinking of making is already made, but searching for it is impossible on that horrible site.

4yr

IndeLv4

the other half is harry potter lol

OtakuReverence:You whats funny half the **** in fanfiction.Net is naruto

4yr

1Dreamer_OwlLv4

In his honor

Inde:the other half is harry potter lol

4yr

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ForgottenLifeAuthor

Hello! Author here. I am a new writer who is writing a original novel. I have read various and thought of writing a fan-fiction to improve my writing skills. NOW FOR THE FAN-FIC There will be no harem, sorry to disappoint harem lovers. Though there can be two wives depending on reader's demand. A poll will be conducted to decide that. I am writing a action novel with mix elements of fantasy and adventure. I have zero experience in writing romance and don't expect me to pull out cheesy romance out of nowhere, though I am currently reading some romance novels to learn, but that will not be the focus for this novel. As unnecessary romance and harem may f**k up the story and drastically reduce the quality of reading experiences. Thank you and stay tuned with me and also don't forget to check out my original Novel based on Indian Mythology with many legendary beings and powers.

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3RR0R_404Lv4

Hmmm can't really write a review since I'm bad at describing things but I'll try. Well let's see, grammar, its ok, I don't have any problems with it. Update, well its stable so that's good. Story development, I don't know since I can't think of anything to say to this. Characters, they're not emotionless puppets so that's good. World background, the author I guess knows it so its good

4yr

TandorisLv3

Not for me, dropped chater 23, i don't understand the need to make the Mc so OP from the beginning , lit's like if he was litteraly screaming "I'M DIFFERENT, I'M SMART, I'M GENTLE" non stop with his action and the story developpement , while saying "I'm totally normal" to other character. Sad , the concept of Madara's grandson could have been nice if he wasn't so stupidly OP from the start

3yr

_nothing_muchLv1

Story started out strong, ended up faltering as it went on. Introduced random factors to maintain some semblance of motivation for mc's growth, and characters remain stagnant (except for powers) throughout novel. Interesting read at first, but I'll be dropping it now.

3yr

ediushshshs599_1Lv3

i don't know why people need to make Naruto into a wuxia. My best guess is that the author had no ideas. The story was nothing special. the starting powers were op. the idea were childish.

3yr

shwahLv1

everything started very well... I read 100 chapters but couldn't take any more. a lot of excess. The protagonist is strong but useless. it's very sad.

2yr

InSCLv13

Reveal spoiler

3yr

KAI0Lv4

I'm disappointed. The author doesn't seem to have a grasp of how to form a storyline well, and keeps mixing up details between the various time periods in the story. Good effort, but the story lacks draw. It seems to me like the new villains only exist to give a challenge to the OP MC, who is only OP 50% of the time. That being said, writing is tough and I do see talent in the author as a writer. The language is clear and the writing itself isn't bad at all. Improving your foreshadowing skills and solidifying your overall plot before writing anymore would be nice. It's also unnecessary to give the MC so many powers, when just a few of them are actually used. Study the manga a little more - and I'd suggest reading some of the fanfics on translatinotaku, to inspire you more. Thanks for the hard work!

3yr

Da_King_001Lv1

Their are too many elements' introduced. The MC is not even able to use all the abilities and I don't like this type of plot. Its my opinion so don't get offended.

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