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I love thriller and stories with twists that keeps me on my toe. Your story is interesting, but a little bit fast paced. And some grammatical errors here and there. Nothing crucial enough to bother me, but definitely noticeable. A little bit of improvement and proof-reading will go a long way. Best of luck!
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I wanted to acknowledge the comments that I forgot to 3 years ago, hope you can forgive me for seemingly abandoning this. I'm doing my best as a non native speaker, and as a shy socially awkward person, I have trouble writing the recent more slice of life stuff. I hope you can give me more insights as per how I can improve. Hope you like the chapters that are to come.