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2020-08-11 JoinedIndia
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  • s8a4o10101
    s8a4o101016mth
    Replied to xiaohai_23

    Thanks for reading the story and sorry that I couldn't reply before 3 years have already passed. I hope you also like the newer chapters. Also I'm hoping to do a few time skip, as this will become repetative as they are stuck in a shelter for an year. Can you let me know what you think about having a few time skips, after having so detailed description of each day? Thank you for your support it helps a lot.

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  • s8a4o10101
    s8a4o101016mth
    Replied to MistressUnderworld

    I wanted to acknowledge the comments that I forgot to 3 years ago, hope you can forgive me for seemingly abandoning this. I'm doing my best as a non native speaker, and as a shy socially awkward person, I have trouble writing the recent more slice of life stuff. I hope you can give me more insights as per how I can improve. Hope you like the chapters that are to come.

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  • s8a4o10101
    s8a4o101016mth
    Replied to LinYang

    Thanks for the review, I know I'm 3 years late but still wanted to acknowledge the few comments which I couldn't. I was having a lot of stress due to family and school matter hope you can enjoy the newer chapters. Also if you got some critique please let me know. Hope you can forgive me for not writing for a while. Thank you, reviews help a lot.

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  • s8a4o10101
    s8a4o101013yr
    Replied to Alisha_McQueen

    yes, it is true.

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  • s8a4o10101
    s8a4o101013yr
    Replied to QuietScreamer

    Can I get a translation of this review, what is said here? I can't understand.

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  • s8a4o10101
    s8a4o101013yr
    Replied to Omnidoa

    ahh... I didn't noticed that. Well that was how bad I was at writing. Thank you for pointing that out.

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  • s8a4o10101
    s8a4o101013yr
    Replied to The_Pen

    it's because I'm not very great at writing and I want finish a scenario in a chapter while not writing more a thousand words. I don't like long chapters that very much.

    Ch 3 first mega mutant
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  • s8a4o10101
    s8a4o101013yr
    Replied to DiligentObserver

    And it would be appreciated if you can point out some more things like this, I didn't took this novel that seriously at first so their should be many more things that won't make any sense scientifically, I wouldn't want that anymore and I don't have the time needed to reread fix everything because of my study. I'll do this eventually but, a bit of help would be appreciated. I'm still not very great at writing anyways.

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  • s8a4o10101
    s8a4o101013yr
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    Thank you for pointing that out I should have looked it up before. I'm changing it to what it supposed to be. Thank you again.

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  • s8a4o10101
    s8a4o101013yr
    Replied to s8a4o10101

    I had done a little mistake, that wasn't the great war but the nuclear war.

    So where should I go then? doesn't look like I'm gonna get anything that I need here. If I remember correctly there should be a farm in a nearby, let's see if it could work out, I think if we could save it from acid rain, it should be cultivating, and there might be some animal that aren't effected by this radiation, now I have another mouth to feed, I need to be extra careful from now on.
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  • s8a4o10101
    s8a4o101013yr
    Replied to DiligentObserver

    Not everything have been radiated here, there is still some fish and where Jakub is the radiation is somewhat low, so the crops aren't effected that much here. The normal trees and animals endured the most effects. The crops most likely have been taken care by farmers if the farmers were alive. And before you ask it, no human survived the mutation, so no mutant humans here, though some humans are still alive because of their location as, not every nations have participated on that great war so, there are some areas with very low radiation. And one last thing, most of the animals who were not mutated are hidden so that they can survive. You will have the best odd of surviving a year afterwards in this story if you are in a submarine as, the seas and rivers are the least polluted areas for now and so the safest food other than crops and some isolated fruits they are the safest food. But after this year passes and if, you aren't dead and in a submarine then you are pretty much screwed. If someone have a way to isolate their food source and survive the mutant creatures, only then they can survive. Sorry for bad English.

    So where should I go then? doesn't look like I'm gonna get anything that I need here. If I remember correctly there should be a farm in a nearby, let's see if it could work out, I think if we could save it from acid rain, it should be cultivating, and there might be some animal that aren't effected by this radiation, now I have another mouth to feed, I need to be extra careful from now on.
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  • s8a4o10101
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    The writing style is unique and suited for the story. This is one of the only stories that make me want to read it. I'm not very much into reading but, this story makes me wanting to read it over and over. This really deserves a five star.

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    Yanhua
    Urban · LinYang
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  • s8a4o10101
    s8a4o101013yr
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    I liked the way the story is narrated. The way the story goes on and the way it is presented, it gives a feel of mistery, fitting for a title that the author used. All things considered it's a great story.

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    7 Not-so-deadly sins
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  • s8a4o10101
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    The way the story flows and the dialogues are put into places it gives a sense of mystery, reading this makes me wanting to know more about the incidents much like the mc, the world is put together in a very intersting. As the first novel of your, author you have done a fantastic work. You should keep it up.

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  • s8a4o10101
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    I don't really know what to say. The way you put everything is just what I like in a story like this. The back story of the main equipment of the mc, mc being someone who is despiced by others, and giving your readers as much knowledge that they can think of a flow but will not be able to stop reading. I will say you are great at what you do.

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  • s8a4o10101
    s8a4o101013yr
    Replied to Gery_

    Thank you for your kind review. It helps a lot.

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  • s8a4o10101
    s8a4o101013yr
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    Have you guys checked the new cover? What do you think about the new cover? I drew it myself. Well let's see how many comments I get. Though I don't think I'll get more than 8 comments in only a week. But who knows?

    Ch 8 The first knowledge about the mutants
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  • s8a4o10101
    s8a4o101013yr
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    Your narrative choice is excellent. The way you introduced the mc was great and easy to visualise. The description is great and the character of the mc is suiting. The thing I liked the most is the relevance to the title, not many can achieve that. The only problem is that sometimes you make some grammar and spelling mistakes, though those doesn't effect the overall experience.

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    The Face Behind the System
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  • s8a4o10101
    s8a4o101013yr
    Replied to iam_adh

    Yeah I think so.

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  • s8a4o10101
    s8a4o101013yr
    Replied to iam_adh

    Sorry for those issues you had. As of now I'm working on those problems. I hope I can overcome those problems soon. Thank you for your review.

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