Review Detail of Eggscapeplan in Overlord: The Origin

Wow, what a pitiful creature. You know, did you think about.... idk, not reading it?

Am I the only one who likes when the novel has... idk... character development and world background? I am a huge fan of Overlord and it was my first LN ever and I like your FF very 😄 Even the fact that you only are at the beginning of the novel and written already 50 chaps speaks only for the creativity of the Author... When I want a novel which only stays on 'normal' plot why bother creating a FF? Even when you are sometimes a troll you're our handsome Author-sama! Thanks for all the chapters and stay healthy while writing the chapters for the patreons 👍😂

This fanfic is not too bad, it's not enough to make me stop reading. Why are you getting triggered over my critisism?

What I meant by that is, try to just not read my "constant emotes and nonsense" if that triggers you so much. *sigh*

so your saying that the best way to read this story is to not read it.... thanks for letting me know "author-san"

bruh the po gif maked me laugh like a bih🤣🤣

"made me laugh"

SO ITS AVERGAE COMPARED TO TRASH FF?

Bro, half of those fanfics aren't even mid, in my opinion. Read a One Piece fanfic where it's pfp is Shanks and the name of MC is Damien. Tadako isn't Normal is just the typical fanfic where the author adds new characters every chapters and very cliche plot. Also, not a fanfic but "The Legendary Mechanic" is also a good one. The characters aren't the typical "you dare hurt my son?!". Not to mention the MC is smart and the other villains are also very interesting and likeable. While, the story of fanfic is good but I am not a fan of the author ranting not to mention literally making chapters out of things we don't really care about and we'll forget.

So True

Agreed

Dude I have absolutely no idea which one piece fanfic you're talking about? I tried looking but you didn't really give much to find it...

One Piece: Path to Power

So 50 chapters huh well... I'm not sure if I have eyes or if I'm using something else to see

oh shi, he deleted most of chapter I think

Wow, what a pitiful creature. You know, did you think about .... Idk, not writing fanfics? If you can't take other people's opinions, don't write.

Do you know a review does not have to be 5 stars and that your story is good? You had that comeing.

The po gif is the best part of the story 5/5 stars just like the writer wants.