If you want money don't do fanfic they are for fun and only og stuff will get you any real pay outside of places with 0 copyright laws as then you can push for payment to be required read fanfic.

That was stupid this was a grade A fanfic but that pushed it to B this looks to be heading to a mixed mashed pile of trash if this keeps up.

I agree with some of the things you say but almost all of your problems have an answer the power he has is based on Visionary Pathway of Lord of mysteries not some made up quirk if anything the writer should have made him quirkless but with the power as it would cause less confusion on the power and what he could do. Had someone make a Haku from Naruto fanfic with the quirk' being chakra that a lot of people have but some have more quirks 'bloodlimits' so it came off very wrong for the MHA world.

Not reading till 100 as to many stop now but I will say you have my respect not posting a emoji spam 5 star rating. This gave me hope that the site may still have some good writers and not just a bunch of mtl spamers.

I'm here to ask does her power ever get unnerfed and used even slightly as powerful as it should have been at the start?

The one I use is by looking up the name in raw then the website is 69shu yes I know it sounds bad but its the one I have been using for most of the mtl novels I want to read ahead. Just search in google should be the 3rd one last I checked has light blue icon then let it chrome translate for you. If you want og raw I think this came from webnovel's og site which you would need an account on.

Raw name 木叶，开局融合五条悟 or just type the name and mtl to have it pop up but only 50 chaps on the one I found on raw over 300.

Also its faloo and ends at 138 on mtl site.

Without a weakened g war body she would be at least the same as that of the normal one summoned by the moon cell in other words she can't use al but she could use exal to the max power and spam it too with unlimited mana in other words she would be a person who can fire 1-c power attacks. Based on fact they are one to one in stats and power but in the wiki for both are based on conditions of the 4th g war not true power of a living one of the both. Could you imagine the story if it was based around this? Think gold or comic superman throwing all or nothing punches like a normal one all day with no need to rest saitama would have nothing on her.

Want to ask before reading does this have anything to do with LOTM?

I got my answers from your other novels so I'm gone anyone else thinking of staying look at the count of his other novels and you will understand my reason.

You drop or you don't drop there is no hiatus for webnovels no web writer comes back? With that said should I remove this from my lib?

Can we get to 100-150 chapters on this before you start that new pot agenda story you made and don't say it is not you have what must be a 10k plus essay and explanation on how to make a good one or improve an essay on the pot on the 1st chapter.

You know that make zero sense right for the first part you just said as words don't do that and them being wrote and not removed when you posted the chapter means they are significant by basic writing rules. Next anything a character in a story says, writes, actions, or thoughts is implied by the act to be the work of the character in short words even if the words were exaggation the character who used them has to have the same meaning of exaggerating them they can't be separate. If he wasn't then that means he didn't know he coundn't do what he said and thus wasn't exaggerating which means the words were said in ignorance and not exaggeration.

I'm going to take a step back and explain step by step. 1st in the chapter after talking about having more power in the grail that he could use he says he could bring the people wrongly died during the war back. 2nd I made the comment of he can't do that actually which true magic can't. 3rd your reply was you were just eggerating that statement which would mean that he was joking and knows he can't bring them back. 4th I replied how that reply comes off wrong in the context of what we are talking about and if the mc knows he can't bring them back but is still willing to let a town become a major war zone were men,women, old, and even children which has happen directly from the start exp (Oda actions) will die just for his wants that makes him just as bad as the child killer he killed at the start and replaced in the war which would come as a twist out of nowhere but if he thinks he can but doesn't know he can't that comes off as him just be stupid and will be sorry when he learns he can't 5th you replied with how you didn't get how got that 6th I'm now trying to explain if this work ok if not I will think of something else

You know that dosn't sound good in this context like your jokeing about killing a town (exaggerating about being able to fix all the damage you caused and bring back the people killed because of you) if you or the mc don't know than that is just not guilty though not knowing but if you do I guess the mc really is a heartless monster like the person he replaced in the war. Not that I have a problem with that kind mc but seems like a sudden twist.

Problem with what you said in this chap true magic can't bring the truly dead back to life once the soul has returned to the root it is gone the most that can be done is remake a copy. TM can repair and put the soul back in the body or make a new one that is a copy (acts like the person but still not them) but if the soul dies nothing can be done. This was not a problem in the age of gods as each religions afterlife worked as a warehouse for the souls but now in the age of man other than heros who join the throne or other none special circumstances all souls go to the root and die forever.

Not related to story at all but do you know of some buddha power mc novels even if mtl or raws?

I'm the same with the rewrite part which is why it was hard to say that. I wanted to make it known I did like the start like up till the part where the 3 realms were split without him would have been a 4 but after it starts to sadly be chiped at piece by piece till it felt like what I wrote in my review.

This novel is bad the writer goes back and forth on what the guy tells us so much a note of quistable writer should be placed instead of a quistable mc. The words I'm about say were once thought never to cross my lips as I view them in same like as saying one should always nerff and never buff but this story needs a overhaul and "rewite!!!!" that was awful so bad I need bleach for my fingers after typing that. For anyone ? why I wrote this someone tell me when naruto and percy jackson combined worlds. Anyone still not getting it the writer keeps telling us the world is PJ. The massive changes for no reason just add on like one min Hestia is still good then she is like the rest. Why Hera would want the underworld is never said as all the gods even the og Hades hated it. I do get the big surprise is going to be probably the fates having something to do with it but that feels like bad writing or an accuse for not having one. Haven't checked but don't think the fates or people with power like theirs could affect gods fully and only worked indirectly by affecting things around them like make a god die by giving something the fate that it will kill one but then a god has the opposite happen in that nothing but that can kill them and even then it takes massive amount of power.