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Review Detail of Gridmark in One Piece: Finally Free

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GridmarkLv53yrGridmark

My impression of the MC went from 80 to 10 and i don't like his crewmates, the writing quality and update rate is good and I encourage new readers to give this a try though maybe they will like it, the characters just don't click with me sorry author

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One Piece: Finally Free

TheEnlightenedSage

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TheEnlightenedSage
TheEnlightenedSageAuthorTheEnlightenedSage

It's all good. I can't expect everyone to like it.

Conquerer007
Conquerer007Lv2Conquerer007

Yes author you should not have recruited everyone in alabasta. It is understandable for you to take robin but some random no name characters thats bad.

TheEnlightenedSage:It's all good. I can't expect everyone to like it.
Conquerer007
Conquerer007Lv2Conquerer007

Another thing is you can say he will train them but are they worth it and moreover if they were really hardworking they wouldnt have been no names. Furthermore the women you chose are leeches they are there with whoever is strong to get off of them. Why would they even work hard thats not why they joined and they wont have the will to become strong then how will they train . To train like mc says you need talent along with the will they are just leeches they dont have the motivation why is the mc wasting his time and recruiting potential backstabbers like they did to croccy.

Conquerer007:Yes author you should not have recruited everyone in alabasta. It is understandable for you to take robin but some random no name characters thats bad.
TheEnlightenedSage
TheEnlightenedSageAuthorTheEnlightenedSage

Is that really a good reason to leave 3 bad reviews? I will delete them because you're rating my entire story on one desicion. Because of your three reviews my rating just dropped a lot.

Conquerer007:Yes author you should not have recruited everyone in alabasta. It is understandable for you to take robin but some random no name characters thats bad.
Conquerer007
Conquerer007Lv2Conquerer007

I changed my review to 3 stars as i dont mean to down your rating what i am saying is that the recruitment in alabasta is a big problem in the plot and chacracter presentation. And i have posted only 1 review.

TheEnlightenedSage:Is that really a good reason to leave 3 bad reviews? I will delete them because you're rating my entire story on one desicion. Because of your three reviews my rating just dropped a lot.
TheEnlightenedSage
TheEnlightenedSageAuthorTheEnlightenedSage

I have plans for the two of them and they will be .a great addition to Ken's crew. But if you don't like them joining, I hope you still enjoy the story. About the 3 reviews I was talking about. I saw in my notifications three reviews and each review has a different rating.

Conquerer007:I changed my review to 3 stars as i dont mean to down your rating what i am saying is that the recruitment in alabasta is a big problem in the plot and chacracter presentation. And i have posted only 1 review.