As a person who is so used to reading fanfics with system and cheats, I thought this was going to disappoint me. But this story surprised me, it has a really good premise and I loved the character development of the MC. Also the author had a good grasp of some of the major characters of One Piece (I can't say I am person with extensive knowledge of One Piece but I was able to buy that this story was set in One Piece world), as the character interactions made me feel like I was watching the One Piece anime again but with the MC's story. Also this story does not follow the canon word by word, there is a lot of creativity going in this story. I also loved that the author is not afraid of experimenting with the canon story, I was getting tired of reading One Piece fanfics which follows canon and the MCs doing anything extra. Also the MC is not weak, he might not be the strongest in One Piece but he can be a bit troublesome for his enemies, just read the first 16 chapters and see if this fanfic is for you. For those who are hesitating to read give this fanfic a try and see if this if for you. I enjoyed reading it, Good job author and is looking forward to updates. P.S. I dont write reviews usually, so I apologize if was this was not helpful.

Here I'm am giving a review. I first thought that I reviewed your novel, but looking around I didn't. Sorry, Sage. I'll first come and say to future people who would stumble upon my review, this novel is worth reading. The story follows a well-established plot, not abating from that. The MC even if Sage likes to say he's not truly overpowered. But who cares, everyone likes an overpowered character as long is bound to the logic of the story. As you go and read forward you'll see his writing improvements, him trying to develop his characters, as much that he can. But at least he did it. He didn't do an asspull like 70% of fanfics about One Piece are doing around. For example, reincarnate in canon time, after that you have 2 paths, you steal all straw hats except for Luffy, or be part of the straw hats. I mean come on where's the fan in the fanfic if you just follow canon blindly. Well, in conclusion, give this novel a try, you already have a lot of chapters to get addicted to. .............................................................................................. Ahem, I'll also be a shameless thief and try to steal some readers from here, don't mind me, Sage. I'm a new writer around here that also does a One Piece fanfic, that follows the journey of Vlad the Impaler (Dracula) in the One Piece world. Go give it a try guys, the novel also has chicks going around(that's for the simps).

so I just read the new chap and finally decided to drop now. the bad point of this story: first ever since the mc started his crew he somehow able to make ace join him (not to big of a deal btw) second many character acted more like an oc such as van augur (but this is not a big deal too as maybe the author just can't get the act right) third he recruited some useless girls from alabasta (among the three only robin was kinda useful because she can read poneglyph the other two was just a leech) fourth the powerlevel was shitty utterly shitty (he can win again dory and broggy, win again enel, and that leopard guy, can fight against sea king underwater, but lose again a vice admiral?) fifth he have haki but mostly useless (to the point I thought that is haki really that useless) sixth in the newst chapter the three girl want the mc to accept perona or they will the crew, when the mc don't care and started leaving. the three girl actually attacked him, and mc only punched their face once and that was just to knock them out. as for perona the mc already started to walk away and leave her, but somehow perona started to have a suicidal though and said her miserable life out loud, and the mc somehow feel guilt and what not decided to accept her and that where I drop this. the good point of this story is: first the flow and take was mostly different from other fic.

I was utterly disappointed when I read chapter 66-70 about betrayal thingy. Poorly executed, and if you think that disobedience = betrayal. Might as well you should have a doll instead of nakama. Coz after this shit, I deduce that author didn't knew how this society work in this real life or "jungle world" where the mc in. If you think that they would remain loyal after those harsh punishments (to slash a hand, feet, and moreover a woman's face). You may be wrong. And for reason some of "gender equality" excuse to punch his women's face (nakama) is just bullshit and nonsense for me. Then what about a joke when all his woman's crew beating him when he was joking. isn't that betrayal??? So when those plot of three of women (robin, mikita, and zala) want to recruit perona is considered betrayal for him. it was so laughable for me for this inconsistence, unstable mind of MC. Yeah you could write as you like and but I had my right to write a very bad review for you. Please learn about "nakama" meaning to improve your story.

It's just Canon but instead of Luffy the MC. He also refuses to use devil fruits which is just retarded. Who writes a One piece fanfiction without DFs?? WTF.

I don't really like the main character. The flow of the story is quite good, but the character design is shitty (sorry, I don't any better way to put it).

Its good but from chap 68 shits went down from my perspective, Its like you just redeemed your self from other psychopaths readers but the others were just meh, I loved the dark parts especially about his family but maaaan, just this chapter ticked me off.

I had read the author's other fanfiction story, its was great and based on this I would say his writing and story is satisfying. Hope it'll be the same as this new story.

Reveal spoiler

Reveal spoiler