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2021-04-02 10:17

This is my second review, so I hope you don't mind... From all the books I've read in the past, this one piques my interest the most, tbh. It's fresh, it's new, the topics of the story are all fun and somewhat relatable, even though it's just a fictional story. Most protagonists would come off as "they knew everything from the start" or that "they're Invincinble" or something. However, Shizuka here isn't. Well, she IS smart, I can tell you that. The way the author portrayed her character was fun to read and watch. She's also not that OP like most protagonists are. Sure, she has an unbelievable power above others, but even she has some flaws here and there. And I like how the author balanced their (the Spirit Wielders') great power comes with great risks as well. It's not impossible to beat them, but it's not possible either without brains. The strategies the author placed in the story are amazing that I had to keep guessing and guessing, only to be amazed by the results and plot twists. All I can say is, a great story isn't a story that has great grammars or even great plots (this story has both), but a great story is a story that brings the readers into it, like they're the ones being in that particular tale. This story is exactly that. It made me imagine that I'm one of the characters in the story. The author changes our perspectives on the story a lot, so I don't really get bored reading it from Shizuka's side of the story only. We can see the other characters' perspectives on the matter, allowing us to also remember their behaviours, thoughts, and sometimes their backgrounds. Since the story and world buildings are in full detail, I can always imagine each scene in mind. The sense of family in this story is immaculate as well, it would be a lie to say that I don't love it. Their jobs and duties, being teens and trying to find their life choices, students and what not-- they're all really fun to read. This story is already over 250 chapters when I posted this review, so I hope it helps the new readers to have a grasp on what I thought on this book! Give a review to this book and support it, because the author gave a fantastic job at writing it! Also note that when I'm writing this review, most of the chapters haven't been edited like the first few ones, so a head's up!

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Thank you so much for the detailed review, I love you huhuhu ༼;´༎ຶ ۝ ༎ຶ༽ Anyways, thank you for the positive words! My day's so much better now! I will try to improve more and update whenever I could, thank you for your patience and please bear with meeeee! ❤️🐻❤️

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Hmm, I am shamelessly giving myself a 5 stars review since I enjoy writing this story and enjoy how it goes at the same time, but readers all have different opinions on books and the genres they like. For this particular book, I wouldn't say that it's exactly perfect. It doesn't use beautiful words like other books I've read as well. I'm only using words available in my vocabulary. From my experience, those who are not native to English have a hard time understanding difficult words and words that are rarely heard in daily lives, such as myself. I have a hard time understanding them, so I would take that into consideration since I know that not all readers are native English speakers. Also, I may have chosen the "Fantasy-Romance" genre for this book. However, must I remind you, this book will mostly focus on the adventure, fantasy, and action aspects rather than romance. That said, I will slip in a few moments of romance into my story, even though I have no idea how to write one, hehe... (forgive me as I have no experience whatsoever in writing romance-related lines and plots). I would say that this book will be leaning mostly towards Anime and Japanese terms, such as dividing the volumes into story arcs and whatnot. However, I will also be using other mythologies and legends from all over and use them as inspiration in my book. Their names might be the same, but their background would not. I am hoping that I will be able to bring readers into my story, as I believe that a good story is a story that's able to bring its readers into its world as if they're living in that world. I AM writing this story out of pure imagination and ideas from watching Animes, reading other books, and looking at pictures or even my own experiences. And with this shameless review, I hope you can enjoy my book~! - Xierryne Author's Note: - I will wait for your honest reviews in the reviews section. - I will try to improve myself more and expand my vocabulary as I write this book. - You are free to point out my typos, misspellings, or even grammatical mistakes. I will try my best to fix them as fast as I can. - This book is still under editing stage when I write this review, so please bear with the typos and mistakes still visible in this book. I am not the best author out there, but I will try to make this book a fun ride for you guys! Thank you so much for giving my book a chance~! Happy Reading~!

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