Item: Our Story: Spirit Wielders
Rating: 5

EverSilverLv14yr

2020-10-22 08:20

I am re-reviewing this, since I feel like my last review is too... "meh," or smthg like that-- I just wanna say that... THIS BOOK IS FREAKING AMAZING!!! I recommend those who love a story with a sense of family, or maybe those who love magic and adventures, THIS IS A STORY FOR YOU. The way the story flows makes you imagine that you, yourself is in the story as well. The way the author describes them also makes you imagine the scenes, which was *chef kiss,* PERFECTO. Also, can I just praise how much thought and detail that was put in this book? A M A Z I N G That's all I can say. If there's a word that can describe this book better, it would be... Hmm, "mesmerizing?" or maybe "imaginative" and "descriptive." The world buildings in this book are also great. The way the author describes them is beautiful and just perfecto. The characters are also all so unique, each having their own nature and behaviour-- I especially like the boyssssssss-- They be cyote tho... and YES, I fangirl over the author's beloved boys XD (Don't mind me here, just minding my own business, crazy over all the boys author-chan has created--) The author also balanced between conversations and story narrations, including descriptions and such. The story is divided into different arcs, in which the author decided to divide into volumes. Great job on that! I can imagine how the author is an outgoing and cheerful person since I also imagine her wanting to use kanjis and emojis so bad from her other book, full of character info (Which I am very grateful for). If only Webnovel allows pictures, then maybe the author can put a pic of how her characters would look like XD (So I can simp--) Okay, enough of my ranting... This book is full of mystery and solving stuff too, also teamwork and school days (If you haven't known already), that I exceptionally LOVE. Also, if you read this book, all the things that happened in their everyday lives are sort of the same with how most of us live our lives. I can relate to Shizuka so much -v-; Her brothers are all so fun and unique too! Yuzuru be mah favvvvvvv-- YAAASSSSS!!! (Tho I wanna love Eito so bad, but after realizing he's already freaking married, so no. I'm not that kind of girl XD) Aside from all this, I really love it, so keep up the good work, author-chan!!! Ganbatte-ganbatte!!! NOTE: If I can make this 10 stars instead of 5, I would've done so from the start XD

Our Story: Spirit Wielders

Xierryne

5.0

289 Chs

Liked by 9 people

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XierryneAuthor

Oh my God, thank you so much for the kind review******w TT^TT, I'll try my best to improve more, pls bear with me ^^

4yr

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XierryneAuthor

Hmm, I am shamelessly giving myself a 5 stars review since I enjoy writing this story and enjoy how it goes at the same time, but readers all have different opinions on books and the genres they like. For this particular book, I wouldn't say that it's exactly perfect. It doesn't use beautiful words like other books I've read as well. I'm only using words available in my vocabulary. From my experience, those who are not native to English have a hard time understanding difficult words and words that are rarely heard in daily lives, such as myself. I have a hard time understanding them, so I would take that into consideration since I know that not all readers are native English speakers. Also, I may have chosen the "Fantasy-Romance" genre for this book. However, must I remind you, this book will mostly focus on the adventure, fantasy, and action aspects rather than romance. That said, I will slip in a few moments of romance into my story, even though I have no idea how to write one, hehe... (forgive me as I have no experience whatsoever in writing romance-related lines and plots). I would say that this book will be leaning mostly towards Anime and Japanese terms, such as dividing the volumes into story arcs and whatnot. However, I will also be using other mythologies and legends from all over and use them as inspiration in my book. Their names might be the same, but their background would not. I am hoping that I will be able to bring readers into my story, as I believe that a good story is a story that's able to bring its readers into its world as if they're living in that world. I AM writing this story out of pure imagination and ideas from watching Animes, reading other books, and looking at pictures or even my own experiences. And with this shameless review, I hope you can enjoy my book~! - Xierryne Author's Note: - I will wait for your honest reviews in the reviews section. - I will try to improve myself more and expand my vocabulary as I write this book. - You are free to point out my typos, misspellings, or even grammatical mistakes. I will try my best to fix them as fast as I can. - This book is still under editing stage when I write this review, so please bear with the typos and mistakes still visible in this book. I am not the best author out there, but I will try to make this book a fun ride for you guys! Thank you so much for giving my book a chance~! Happy Reading~!

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Wow, just wow. This story has a large world building and it’s very descriptive in both characters and its world. I enjoy the FL and the struggles, the magic, the sense of family in this novel. The author has done a great job! If you read this, you can definitely picture it as a show from scene to scene! Keep it up Author!

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I think I gotta write the review now cuz the story hooked me up, and I have not finish reading the whole stuff! The plots are good, the descriptions are on point, i might have a bit trouble remembering who and who at first cause too many characters appear at the same time🤣 And I like the long chapters!! made the wait worth! please keep it up, author! Im gonna anticipate the upcoming ones

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I. Am. Loving. Everything. About. This. Book!!! XD From the characters to the descriptions and details, everything just wows me!! Keep it up, Author-chan!! ^^

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I like, scratch that, LOVE everything about his book!!! So much details and world-building. Nothing is perfect, so i don't mind some of the mistakes. Everyone makes mistake, so yeah. You have to read this book, i'm surprised it doesn't receive that much reviews XD

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