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Review Detail of MikruZero in Memories Like a Dagger

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MikruZero
MikruZeroLv43yrMikruZero

If you want to have a wide range of readers then about describing the story a bit much. It's a bit dragging and I can't help but persevere more minutes. The characters seem good. Story building is lacking. While the world background itself also needs work. Overall it's a good read if the readers like long and dragging more descriptive novels. Thanks for this novel!

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Memories Like a Dagger

SolAce

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SolAce
SolAceAuthorSolAce

I see; would you recommend taking out those descriptions or scattering them more throughout the story ? Thanks for the constructive criticism, I’ll see if I can smooth things out ! （╹◡╹）

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MikruZero
MikruZeroLv4MikruZero

I'll dm you in discord later or tomorrow. Still writing sorry. We can exchange pointer there if you want.

SolAce:I see; would you recommend taking out those descriptions or scattering them more throughout the story ? Thanks for the constructive criticism, I’ll see if I can smooth things out ! （╹◡╹）
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SolAce
SolAceAuthorSolAce

My discord account is ~Sol~#9950, so contact me there ^^

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MikruZero
MikruZeroLv4MikruZero

Already added you!

SolAce:My discord account is ~Sol~#9950, so contact me there ^^
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