Review Detail of joul in Invincible System in ATG (Hiatus)

IMHO... Tis is one of the best ATG FF as of now... I like how u dev the MC and his characteristics... He looks honourable and human... I hate ori MC coz he looks and acts like a gigollo and think with his d***... I like the interaction between him and jasmine (she need happiness) and cang yue (bez waifu) and between both of them... If u want to go the harem route... They must have interaction between the harem member... They must always be with him to provide support or a bit of slice of life as they are his mate not his pets... One example was in Man Against God... And not like in ori where he left them and his child to go elsewhere and mate with other women... If it burden, just limit to four member as it give u the necessary space to dev... Overall, ur story is best so keep the good work... Salutation and Plus Ultra...