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joul7mthReplied to ZoroTraineeWriterWell yes... But remember that all the people liam invite is those that fated to join like in the manga... Like Liam invite Chopper and Luffy accepted... Liam himself knows what sort of crew that Luffy wants... Thats y he did not ask Luffy to allow the baroque to join the crew but only the fleet...
Ch 134 Liam's Proposal to Invite Franky- joul8mthReplied to KamikazeDrew
Maybe when the girls are preparing b4 going out, he changed (background scene)... as Weiss straightly recognised him when she opened the door...
He'd dressed like a nerd so that he wouldn't attract too much attention with his normally classy attire. It went with the wig and glasses so no odd glances went his way. - joul10mthCommented
So no thicc thigh... Bummer..
Luvia is definitely younger here, she's 5 while the main cast of Fate is in their 16 or 17. - joul10mthCommented
He need to have his own laughing signature...
"Hahahahaha!" "Shishishishi!" - joul10mthCommented
They shine under the sun. . . Gahahaha...
Somewhat disconcerted by the sudden topic but still she replied: '' I only know the basics, they drink blood, they can't be in the sun and they're afraid of garlic?'' Ana said with doubt. - joul10mthReplied to omnioutergod
Crom Cruach
Mark spread his giant wings out and gave a loud instinctive roar that left the Bounded Field. This roar was a message to dragon kind that a new Heavenly Dragon had risen. In the Underworld, a black and gold dragon raised his head excited for a new foe. Every dragon in the world heard this roar as if it was a message to them. - joul1yrReplied to InsanityX
That y she said "might not" ... It is not a certainty...
And of course, she didn't think he had used some bewitching magic or something, since Aunty Bella was also included in the list. And that woman has so much protection that even a killing curse might not do anything to her. - joul1yrCommented
Thou Art I.. I am Thou... Thou has unlocked the Empress Arcana...
This meeting has permanently intertwined the two's fate, beyond their understanding and comprehension. Birthing a bond that will be tempered through the heat of conflict and will remain firm regardless. - joul1yrReplied to King_Morty
In the last chapter he said that if he hellbent on killing the Protag the world will be destroyed and blame the sistem 4 giving him too much strength.
And extremely strong, dangerous, and cruel human beings will slowly emerge out of the darkness and start to try and take over the world. - joul1yrReplied to ButtNakedManCh 19 Who would hurt each other for you?!
- joul2yrReplied to EroosCh 127 Hanzo shocked!
- joul3yrCommentedCh 122 Chapter 16: Hurt
- joul3yrCommentedCh 98 Chapter 17: (づ￣ ³￣)づ
- joul3yrCommented
Emi wins the game... I personally vote 4 no harem... There already a dynamic balance between the three of them as a family... The main point of a good harem is a balance family dynamic thats y usually the Hero need to be strong and decisive as he needs to be the glue and scale to stick and balance the harem... Thats y a p***y and dense hero made the harem story stale and boring as he acts like a gigollo most of the time... In this story Alice-chan is the glue and scale so it is hard for others to get involve unless there is a major events that forces other to involve... "My first Dollars and 2 Cents"
Ch 88 Chapter 7: ╮(─▽─)╭ - joul3yrCommentedCh 85 Chapter 4: (〜￣△￣)〜
- joul3yrCommentedCh 83 Chapter 2: ᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)ᕗ
- joul3yrReplied to Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmUCh 267 267. A Second Spirit?
- joul3yrReplied to ImnyuCh 267 267. A Second Spirit?
- joul3yrPosted
IMHO... Tis is one of the best ATG FF as of now... I like how u dev the MC and his characteristics... He looks honourable and human... I hate ori MC coz he looks and acts like a gigollo and think with his d***... I like the interaction between him and jasmine (she need happiness) and cang yue (bez waifu) and between both of them... If u want to go the harem route... They must have interaction between the harem member... They must always be with him to provide support or a bit of slice of life as they are his mate not his pets... One example was in Man Against God... And not like in ori where he left them and his child to go elsewhere and mate with other women... If it burden, just limit to four member as it give u the necessary space to dev... Overall, ur story is best so keep the good work... Salutation and Plus Ultra...