webnovel
Lexiallyn_11
Lexiallyn_11Lv133yr
2021-10-27 04:50

l love how the story going but its kinda become slow pace?. but anyway I really like how they assessing each other in pro and cons. And how author portrayed the stupidness and smartness of the characters (I don't know the right term but yeah). of course the face slap👌is good, not too much or less ( I mean how many time face slap appeared). Even though the love between them kinda fast but for me is not too cliche or make me cringe all the time. And the communication between the characters I like it also not too much misunderstanding. And last, at first the update is going well but these past few months I think the update is going slower but I keep waiting though ♡ thanks for the author to create a good story ♡ (sorry to my english). love lots ♡❤️♡

Forsaken Immortals

Tinalynge
4.7
367 Chs

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Tinalynge
TinalyngeLv15

Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. This novel is amongst my newest adventures. I have been writing cultivqation novels for many years, and i began writing romance novels a year ago. However I never tried merging my two passions together before this year, and what came out of it was Forsaken Immortals. This story is about fighting for what you believe in. It is about a woman who is strong and independant and who wishes to rely on her own strength to get revenge, however she gets dragged into numerous troubles, and gets entangled by her newly wed husband. I am currently writing quite a few novels, and amongst them is the complete series Blue Phoenix (Also on this site and completely updated), Overthrowing Fate (also on this site, and completely updated) Condemning the Heavens (Also on this site, ongoing) and a few romance novels.

4yr

Mukta
MuktaLv5

This novel is amazing. Author, you have done a great job. The pacing, scenes, chemistry between leads, and the swift yet decisive actions... everything is depicted so well. Every chapter was satisfying, yet left me hanging with the anticipation of what would happen next. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Thank you for writing this. :-)

4yr
Eziolicious
EzioliciousLv2

I love this book so much! Even though the concept is somewhat overused with the whole reincarnation-into-trash thing, the author does it in a refreshing way. The MC is just so interesting, and I can't wait for her to quickly get stronger once again. Also loves the relationship between MC and ML!

4yr
Resmei
ResmeiLv5

So addictive!! can't wait for the next parts to come out. It is your typical storyline but still so good in so many ways. Thanks Author!!!!!

4yr
Lord_Cahill
Lord_CahillLv15

Love this story and characters. But am sad and confused at if this story is dead or not. It's been way too long since a chapter was released.

1yr
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

Hit the Rule 1 of reincarnation novels... im out peace 1st episode first hate I'm not even gonna come back and comment on this yeah rule 1 cannot be broken soo if you've read many reincarnation novels and value rule 1 leave...

3yr
phoenix_8888
phoenix_8888Lv15

I'm not in love with the story but I do like what I'm reading so far even though the ML's immediate acceptance and decision seem to shock me he's still likable. This is a transmigration but its within a different time frame of a soul that was taken advantage. The fact that this information was revealed very early to both leads makes it unique and yet the ML has loyal comrades with questionable intentions. I like the FL so far and there is a mystery to who her predecessor was and the reasons for her enemies actions. The story will stay in my library for now. ' However, I wish the author lessen the looks component of the leads as a reader I am aware that they look beyond amazing but it does not need to get repeated as its unnecessary and usually feels like a filler for something if there is nothing to really say. Its the same with the admiration of the other characters of the leads in a way its speaks to vanity and arrogance. It would be nice to just simply be appreciated without fan fare. Some of the content also has the typical trope to which my sincere advice would be be orginal as much as possible you'll be surprised that there are people who likes that, I'm one of them. Take care

4yr
anndaniels
anndanielsLv12

this book was in the daily mission options, gave it a read & am still here... the only thing that was bit upsetting was the repetition of the same background story in each chapter... to me it seemed as if the author was trying to make up the word count with the repetition....

2yr
Missa_Collingwood
Missa_CollingwoodLv11

I quite literally stayed across this book and now, I have found myself in love. By chance, how many chapters will this book be? I want to save them to read it all when it's finished because I don't want to stop in between to wait on updates. I might cry. 😭😂

3yr
DaoistY7eYQB
DaoistY7eYQBLv13

Simply an outstanding book, this book is akin to a breath of crispy, fresh air. I have read plenty of the cliche reincarnation/transmigration/ugly rock into a polished diamond books. However, none have seemed to grasp the slow pacing, the gradual build-up between characters and their characters relationships, including a way to avenge without making it appear forced or another cliche. This is, by far, one of the best novels I have encountered in this app and I hope to read more of this amazing work when it updates for the normal readers. Thank you for this work of fresh air on a hot, summer day. I hope you, the author, will continue to make mostly non-cliche stories where no character seems fake nor the writing appearing forced. This story flowed unlike most I have read and I can't give any higher praise than this.

4yr
Related Stories

Ethereal World: Vicious Cannon Fodder's Immortality Road

Bei YueYue was known for her selflessness and kind nature. Eventually, she found herself in a new life as 'Huang Ying Yue', a notorious female antagonist infamous for her cruelty, ruthlessness, debauchery, and nymphomaniacal tendencies in the very immortal novel she had just read. In the storyline, the original 'Huang Ying Yue' committed numerous atrocious acts that alienated many formidable characters. Not only the protagonist of the novel but also all her suitors suffered harassment and maltreatment at the hands of 'her' in various disturbing ways. The path to immortality was fraught with peril, brimming with dangers and unpredictable threats. Evil cultivators and monstrous entities wreaked havoc, compelling all cultivators to unite against these malevolent forces. As Yueyue sought to fulfill her aspirations, she faced an array of powerful adversaries previously wronged by 'Huang Ying Yue', as well as confront the consequences of her predecessor's misdeeds. In addition, she had to contend with the icy beauty of Huang Bai Xing, the heroine surrounded by numerous charming men and extraordinary fortunes. Gifted with extraordinary abilities from the heavens, Huang Bai Xing, through her golden finger, continuously grew in strength, patiently waiting for her chance to take revenge on 'Huang Ying Yue'. Those in positions of power, along with Huang Bai Xing's allies, brandished their weapons, determined to deliver a severe punishment for the pain 'she' caused to their beloved. Fortunately, with the aid of a miraculous Ethereal small world bestowed upon her, Yueyue could cultivate spiritual plants, reap spiritual fruits, harness abundant spiritual energy, leaning countless spells, and enjoy the cleansing waters of the spiritual waterfall, all while maintaining a semblance of tranquility on her journey to immortality. Accompanied by her loyal beast army, she ventured down the cultivation path, encountering new friendships, love, challenges, thrills, and a mysterious past, all while transforming her fate and those around her into a brighter future. Unbeknownst to her, her innate charm and warm-heartedness attracted an unending stream of romantic interests, forever altering her once mundane existence. Just when she believed she could finally escape the life of a mere cannon fodder, she stumbled into even greater mess! Why are there so many protagonists in this narrative? What are they staring at her for with those strange and enigmatic looks? Warning: 1VN ending, one female end up with many men. There are taboo love here Please kindly read the tags before you immerse yourself in my world. Cover from: Webnovel AI Generator Character Image: Pinterest, Credit goes to all original owner My Instagram Account: Littlecarrot006_ My DISCORD Username: littlecarrot6510 My second book: Myth Of Miracle: Reborn To Defy My Fate That book is for participating in WSA 2024 (Progressing) #Portalspace #Reverseharem #Taboolove #Femaleleadxianxia #Xianxia #Np #Cultivation #Adventure #Immortality #polyandry #Manybeautifulmen #transmigrated #cannonfodder #Romance #Fighting #Beast #Multicontinents #Mysteriouspast #KindandgentleFLbutnotweak #Forgivebutnotforget #CleverFL

Littlecarrot · Fantasy
4.6
896 Chs

Re-birth: The Beginning after the End

---PLEASE SKIP CHAPTER 166, AS IT WAS ADDED TWICE--- ***Dear readers, hateful comments aimed at my writing style will be removed. I appreciate constructive criticism and feedback but please don’t turn this into a toxic environment or spoil the experience for other readers.*** Li Hua's reign as the twenty-first century's deadliest assassin ended in fire and betrayal. Her own sister, Li Min, turned their elite force against her, leaving nothing but ashes where a legend once stood. In the moment of her death, Li Hua's soul tore free from its earthly bonds, hurtling across the boundaries between worlds until it anchored itself in a new vessel in a realm of ancient martial arts and mystical cultivation. Through this impossible transition, her inner space remained intact—and with it, Little Firefly, her spirit companion. Here, where qi flows like rivers and mountains bow to those who master their cultivation, Li Hua will forge herself anew. No longer content to be merely an assassin of mortal flesh, she sets her sights on ascending to immortality itself—a journey that will shake the very foundations of heaven. DEDICATION To those of us whose cultivation path always leads to immortals with questionable morals and perfect jaw lines. May your daddy issues transcend the three realms and be rewarded with an ancient being who knows exactly what he's doing. AUTHOR'S NOTE Content Warning: This story contains mature themes. Reader discretion is advised. Updates: New chapters release daily. Story Style: This is an epic fantasy with rich world-building and complex characters, woven together with a slow-burn romance subplot. Disclaimer: While this story incorporates some historical facts, it is primarily a work of fiction presenting my unique interpretation of events. This is the ultimate place to chat, speculate, and immerse yourself in the world of my story! -- https://discord.gg/rYQJWfSM

Vangyy · Fantasy
4.9
254 Chs

Ghost Emperor Wild Wife: Dandy Eldest Miss

Yun Luofeng, the genius of Huaxia Medicial School, died from an accident, and her soul attached onto the useless Eldest Miss of the General Estate in Longxia Continent. Not only was this trash ungifted in the literary arts and martial arts, but she was also big chested without a brain, arrogant, and self-willed. It was not enough for her to have a perfect fiancé like the Crown Prince. She actually forcibly snatched a pretty boy in public, leading to the Crown Prince to annul their engagement. However, the waste could not withstand this shock, so she actually hung herself to end her life. Opening her eyes again, she was no longer the previous useless eldest miss. With a contract with the Medical God's Code, the possession of a spiritual plant space, and miraculous hands that can bring the dead back to life, her medical skills will stun the world! Extending from the royals and nobles on top to the merchants and old and influential families below, they will all compete to curry her favor. Even His Highness the Crown Prince, who previously broke the engagement, came knocking on the door with a desire to reconcile? In regard to this, a certain mysterious man finally could not endure it anymore and proclaimed, “Whoever dares to come and harass my woman, let them come but never return!” Come party with us on Discord: https://discord.gg/WpxD7AA

Xiao Qiye · Fantasy
4.4
2262 Chs

Hellbound With You

[WARNING: MATURE CONTENT] "I love you, despite the danger signs." ____ Sheltered and innocent Abigail is terminally ill. She knows she will die soon so before she dies, she wants to fulfill her one and only wish - to fall in love. She wants to experience loving someone romantically. But under one strange condition- she wants a man who will not fall in love with her because she doesn't want him to suffer when she's gone. She met Alexander Qinn, the coldhearted and mysterious man. He warns her from the start that he doesn't do love and that he is dangerous. But that made him the perfect man for Abigail. He was exactly the kind of man she was looking for. Alexander will teach the innocent Abigail about his kind of pleasure while Abigail will show him the joy of doing simple things in life. Their completely different worlds collide, Abi's illness and the mysteries about Alexander will slowly be revealed. Can Abigail handle his own kind of hell? Can Alexander handle her light? ___ VOLUME 1 [MAIN STORY] - STATUS: COMPLETED A story of a terminally ill girl and a heartless man. ____ VOLUME 2 [SPIN-OFF] - STATUS: COMPLETED A story of a vampire prince and a feisty and rich human girl. ____ VOLUME 3 [SPIN-OFF] - STATUS: COMPLETED A story of an ancient witch's unrequited love. ____ VOLUME 4 [SPIN-OFF] - STATUS: COMPLETED A story of a ghost and a vampire prince. #enemies-to-lovers ____ Cover is mine so don't use it. Instagram account: kazzenlx.x facebook page: author_kazzenlx Discord server: https://discord.gg/UGTA3A4

KazzenlX · Fantasy
4.8
932 Chs

Tangled in Moonlight: Unshifted

Being the pack defect is bad enough. Getting REJECTED? By your own fated mate? Yeah. THAT is a whole new level of low. Ava Grey is the pack defect, a wolfless shifter. She struggles through life with the vague dream of freedom. Her opportunity comes when she's suddenly informed that she will be attending the Lunar Gala, an annual ball for young adult shifters to find their fated mates. And she finds him. He's beautiful and intense, and his kisses send desire through her veins like a drug. Until he REJECTS her. Ava isn't about to go back to her dreary life. She escapes and forges a new identity far from her pack, and far from her alpha mate. She makes new friends and is even forcefully adopted by a hilarious husky. But just as she settles in and finds happiness, strange things begin to happen... Her husky has been holding secrets. She's hearing whispers that shifter packs all over are looking for her. And she can smell a familiar scent in her apartment, which makes no sense at all... because the man it belongs to rejected her. FEBRUARY 2024 UPDATE: Updates scheduled for 5-7 days a week as I continue recovering and working on my new WSA entry. Thank you for your patience as we move into book 7! --------- This is a wolf shifter romance with multiple triggers that like to waltz hand in hand with all the dark themes through a meadow of dead flowers. In this book you will find the highest of highs and the lowest of lows. Laugh, cry, rage; you can do them all as you follow Ava in the rather perilous journey of being a wolf shifter in this generation of werewolf romance. There are R18 scenes sprinkled throughout this book like candy popping out of a pinata. Please read responsibly. ------- AUTHOR DISCORD: https://discord.com/invite/ApNZDux8kj

Lenaleia · Fantasy
4.6
454 Chs

Apocalyptic Disasters: Carrying a bun and hoarding supplies

After being betrayed by her family, Bai Meiyue found herself struggling in the flourishing age where zombies and mutant animals ruled. And that too with a big belly! Though people called her crazy for being stubborn, Bai Meiyue didn’t regret keeping the fruit of her one-night stand. What she regretted was not protecting her child and trusting those whom she should have killed at the very chance that was handed to her. In the eleventh year, Bai Meiyue lost her child and died while taking revenge on those who took her son away. However, just when Bai Meiyue thought it was the end, she returned two months before the beginning of the doomsday. Carrying the grudge of two lifetimes, she swore to make life living hell for those who harmed her and her son. With the heavens blessing her with a barter system, Bai Meiyue was intent on giving her child everything that he deserved. But why was the child’s father chasing after her? Hello? We only shared a bed for a night. So why was he clinging to her? Her child’s father: From the best medicine to education, you have given our child everything, Meiyue. But what about a father?

fairytail72 · Fantasy
4.5
384 Chs
Login