Item: Forsaken Immortals
Rating: 5
Author: DaoistY7eYQB

DaoistY7eYQBLv134yr

2021-02-19 12:36

Simply an outstanding book, this book is akin to a breath of crispy, fresh air. I have read plenty of the cliche reincarnation/transmigration/ugly rock into a polished diamond books. However, none have seemed to grasp the slow pacing, the gradual build-up between characters and their characters relationships, including a way to avenge without making it appear forced or another cliche. This is, by far, one of the best novels I have encountered in this app and I hope to read more of this amazing work when it updates for the normal readers. Thank you for this work of fresh air on a hot, summer day. I hope you, the author, will continue to make mostly non-cliche stories where no character seems fake nor the writing appearing forced. This story flowed unlike most I have read and I can't give any higher praise than this.

Forsaken Immortals

Tinalynge

4.7

367 Chs

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Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. This novel is amongst my newest adventures. I have been writing cultivqation novels for many years, and i began writing romance novels a year ago. However I never tried merging my two passions together before this year, and what came out of it was Forsaken Immortals. This story is about fighting for what you believe in. It is about a woman who is strong and independant and who wishes to rely on her own strength to get revenge, however she gets dragged into numerous troubles, and gets entangled by her newly wed husband. I am currently writing quite a few novels, and amongst them is the complete series Blue Phoenix (Also on this site and completely updated), Overthrowing Fate (also on this site, and completely updated) Condemning the Heavens (Also on this site, ongoing) and a few romance novels.

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