Item: Forsaken Immortals
Rating: 5
Author: Tinalynge

TinalyngeLv154yr

2020-08-17 21:56

Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. This novel is amongst my newest adventures. I have been writing cultivqation novels for many years, and i began writing romance novels a year ago. However I never tried merging my two passions together before this year, and what came out of it was Forsaken Immortals. This story is about fighting for what you believe in. It is about a woman who is strong and independant and who wishes to rely on her own strength to get revenge, however she gets dragged into numerous troubles, and gets entangled by her newly wed husband. I am currently writing quite a few novels, and amongst them is the complete series Blue Phoenix (Also on this site and completely updated), Overthrowing Fate (also on this site, and completely updated) Condemning the Heavens (Also on this site, ongoing) and a few romance novels.

Forsaken Immortals

Tinalynge

4.7

367 Chs

Liked by 91 people

Replies35

Mer_dithLv15

Thank you author for this novel. Please continue the updates. Will check out the other novels too 👍

4yr

TinalyngeLv15

Thank you so much. I also have 3 modern romances with no fantasy elements. They are called Blossoming Flowers, Forsaken by Love, and Money-Grubbing Lover. Maybe you will enjoy them :D

Mer_dith:Thank you author for this novel. Please continue the updates. Will check out the other novels too 👍

4yr

Mer_dithLv15

So I got really impatient and bought Forsaken Immortals Book 1 on Amazon with up to 92 chapters. Amazing story 👍👏. When will book 2 be released? I will buy immediately, can't wait! 🤩🤩

Tinalynge:Thank you so much. I also have 3 modern romances with no fantasy elements. They are called Blossoming Flowers, Forsaken by Love, and Money-Grubbing Lover. Maybe you will enjoy them :D

4yr

TinalyngeLv15

Well, I am publishing the chapters as I write them on Patreon. Right now there are 106 chapters written. It has been down prioritized for a short while due to a project I have ongoing, but in October I will begin writing 1 chapter a day again :) You can check my patreon here: https://***.patreon.com/tinalynge

Mer_dith:So I got really impatient and bought Forsaken Immortals Book 1 on Amazon with up to 92 chapters. Amazing story 👍👏. When will book 2 be released? I will buy immediately, can't wait! 🤩🤩

4yr

Mer_dithLv15

Thank you 😊 . Now off to read more on Patreon....

Tinalynge:Well, I am publishing the chapters as I write them on Patreon. Right now there are 106 chapters written. It has been down prioritized for a short while due to a project I have ongoing, but in October I will begin writing 1 chapter a day again :) You can check my patreon here: https://***.patreon.com/tinalynge

4yr

karlingLv14

Dear Author please continue the update i already love this novel. where can i read the full book for free?..hoping there’s a site where the book is already fully updated and free to read..God bless Author👍👍👍👍👍😘😘🍾🙏🏻

4yr

TinalyngeLv15

The full novel can not be read anywhere for free. I am afraid that you can only read the full book 1 if you buy it on Amazon or become a Patron :)

karling:Dear Author please continue the update i already love this novel. where can i read the full book for free?..hoping there’s a site where the book is already fully updated and free to read..God bless Author👍👍👍👍👍😘😘🍾🙏🏻

4yr

LuGuixinXzhouFuLv14

Rebirth theme in a novel is fast growing. From the context of your cover I find it a unique twist of event on how the Protagonist comes back to life. Im looking forward for an interesting and lively novel😊👌Godbless Author-san❣️ As an avid novel reader, Its my first encounter of your book,sooner ill try my best to check ur other books😊

4yr

NeverUMindLv15

I’ve read 2 of this author’s series when (I assume she given the name.) she posted through **********. She’s a phenominal author. I started a third series and am thoroughly enjoying her work.

4yr

debanshLv4

I have read the Blue Phoenix series and it was a pleasurable read. I the Blue Phoenix series will have another novel in it's universe.

4yr

karlingLv14

Aw ok Author thank you..keep up the good work in your novel..

4yr

peppermint101Lv13

I purchase it on Amazon but there is only 92 chapters on Amazon and on web novel there is over 120 chapters why is that?

4yr

TinalyngeLv15

Because on amazon it is only book one. Here i have begun book 2 :) the series is ongoing

peppermint101:I purchase it on Amazon but there is only 92 chapters on Amazon and on web novel there is over 120 chapters why is that?

4yr

RurijichannLv15

Dear Author~~ How many chapter will this novel have? Will this be also similar to Forsaken Love? I mean, similar in the genre. Like no heavy drama and angst.

4yr

TinalyngeLv15

Hello. This novel will be much longer than FbL. It will be around 500-1000 chapters according to what I have planned. I have never been very good at writing modern romances, however I have a lot of experience with cultivation novels, so the plot I planned is much longer. Thank you!

Rurijichann:Dear Author~~ How many chapter will this novel have? Will this be also similar to Forsaken Love? I mean, similar in the genre. Like no heavy drama and angst.

4yr

RurijichannLv15

Oh! So this would be a pretty long novel then. I so wanted to start reading it already but then after I’ll have to wait for more chapters! Looking forward for this one! I’m extra curious to our FL since I don’t usually get to read FLs that are mute, deaf and/or mentally challenged. This would be interesting for sure! ❤️ Thank you so much!

Tinalynge:Hello. This novel will be much longer than FbL. It will be around 500-1000 chapters according to what I have planned. I have never been very good at writing modern romances, however I have a lot of experience with cultivation novels, so the plot I planned is much longer. Thank you!

4yr

Nangong_YanmuLv1

Can you please tell me where to find the second season of foresaken immortals?

4yr

ishimori1Lv15

definitely gonna check your story out. love these type of stories!

4yr

TinalyngeLv15

The other stories are not really the same genre, but if you like these, then you might want to consider becoming a patron. on patron I have a lot of series like this one, and they get updated daily. I have: FIve Elements of The Royal Sky Primeval Chaos System Birth of the Stargazer Havoc Ascendant They are all female main character, cultivation, fantasy. However, there are classic fantasy like this one, but also modern fantasy and even apocalyptic and sci-fi fantasy :) ***.patreon.com/tinalynge

ishimori1:definitely gonna check your story out. love these type of stories!

4yr

zverka_21Lv4

thank you author for this amazing story!

4yr

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