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2023-08-08 15:09

love the way the story developed wothout dragging it for so long

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Kamlyn
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So here is the shameless author with self-review. In this review, I will answer a few questions about this novel and why you should read this one. Q. Is this an original story or translation? Ans. This is my original story which I am posting it on webnovel only. So it’s not a translation, if you have any problems or questions regarding the novel, you can directly contact me using my discord ID or Instagram. Q. Why transmigration novel again? Ans. The transmigration genre might be old and cliche but it can never get outdated. This fantasy genre comes with suspense, mystery, and lots of comedic encounters. Also, it’s always fun to read and write. Q. Does this novel have two-sided transmigration just like in Eternal Love? Ans. Unfortunately not. This one only has one-sided transmigration and only one female lead. However, I can assure you that this one is gonna be a fun ride with no major misunderstanding. Q. Does the novel have villains and white lotuses? Ans. Of course. Without them, the story will become tiresome. We need an antagonist to make our leads protagonist. But thanks to these people you will get to see many face-slappings. Q. Does the character formation is based on the reader’s taste? Ans. I will say Yes. Before publishing this story, I asked my old readers a few questions about the formation of characters and framed them according to your taste. The female lead is bold, badass, and of course talented. You can get to see her character development as the story goes. The same goes for the male lead. So don’t expect everything in a few chapters. Haha, try to be a little patient. Q. How many chapters this one is going to have? Ans. Hmm...I am not sure about it yet. Maybe 300-500? However, it depends on the story of how it proceeds. Q. Is this related to Eternal Love in any way? Ans. The background world is the same but they are both different. If you haven’t read the eternal love, you can still read this one. However, I still recommend you to read Eternal love because it has a very distinct concept. Haha, promoting the other one as well. Q. Does this novel is part of WPC? Ans. Yes. The votes will be counted till 17th august only. So I request you to show this one some love just like you did to the other novel. Q. Will this one be dropped after WPC ends? Ans. The answer is no. Either I win or not, I am not going to drop this novel. Since I have started this one, I am going to complete it. I am not a reckless person to start a novel just to win a contest. Q. What is the update schedule? Ans. One chapter a day except for Thursday. The authors need some rest as well. But till the contest, the updates will be regular and the mass releases will be given frequently since it’s a new novel. Q. Can the author take criticisms? Ans. Of course. I can take all the criticisms happily unless it’s not a personal attack. I believe every reader has a right to make comments or reviews about the story and it also helps in the development of the story. It will be better if you can tone down your harsh tone and be respectful while reviewing. Haha, otherwise I can take criticisms well. Also, one more thing, I hope you won’t write reviews only to get exp points. The reviews which only have emojis with zero reading status will be deleted. I don’t want to fill the review section of this one with spams. Q. Is writing style different from the previous one? Ans. The writing style is not different but I will say it has gotten better compared to the first novel since it’s my second novel and I have got some experience in writing as well. I am trying to focus on grammatical mistakes and even if you find any, do point it. I will try to fix it as soon as possible. In the last, I hope you guys give it a read. It took me a lot of courage to start a new novel since it will be a lot of work but I had a story in mind that I wanted to share it with everyone. Also, do give a read to Eternal Love if you’re a binge reader and haven’t read that one yet.

AarnaReddy
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Hello Evil Genius Readers(present and future)😈 I read the author previous book Eternal Love❤ which is really good and wonderful novel. I become addicted to it. After that I started reading this novel from the first day and believe me this is the best novel. You will crave for more chapters.🤩 I never thought that reincarnation novel will be like this. Mostly in reincarnation we found the revenge story. But in this story you find revenge😡, comedy🤣, romance😍, cuteness😊, and what not everything we can enjoy every chap whole heartedly. The author potrayed each and every character neatly and clearly. The way she wrote makes your heart flutter when there is love scene❤, it makes you cry when there is emotional scenes😭, makes you laugh hard when there is a comedy scene🤣. Her overall writing is simply superb. I observe this from her both novels. The story development is really good. The characters, locations, makes you feel it as a real.😯 The character design is the most interesting thing you will find each and every character worth in the story. Every character has a meaning in the story. Author has a way with her character design. The updates of this novel is stable and you can join privilege to enjoy advanced chapters. You will be mesmerised by the FL charm and her attitude. She is a rare gem. I love ML a lot. I know Xu nuan will kill me but it is worth it. He is really a handsome hunk. I am not saying this simply. I read her novels and you all know writing long reviews are very rare. If they wrote then it means they definitely read the novel and showing their interest and love in reviews. Occasional short reviews are also best 😁🤣😍 Keep reading, Keep voting and support the author. More love and strength to you Kamlyn. Love you❤😍😘

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