Item: My Evil Genius Wife
Rating: 4
Author: phoenix_8888

phoenix_8888Lv154yr

2020-08-09 09:08

To be fair, 6 chapters is not enough for me to give a complete review. However, what I have read so far, I like and in a way there are some similarities with your other work Eternal Love, I'm just hoping there will be a fair amount of differences as well. As long as there are more chapters, and it remains interesting I'll continue to read. Just keep the timeline as real as possible to match the actions that are happening or are about to happen. I've noticed of late novels that push a lot of real time activities in 1-2 months when you actually think about it would be around 6 to 7 months is starting to annoy me. Make it align to be more believable. You cannot have a situation whereby in the space of 1 month the FL and supporting characters have done e.g. - got out of the hospital - 100% super healthy, married, become star of the show, have the ML in love with her, become a medical/martial artist to the nth degree, save everyone from a car accident, got new BFF who are loyal to her, got rid of the white lotus and suddenly receive all the love from her birth parents etc. etc. It does not make sense and its a turn off. Since she is in the hospital let the FL use the time wisely and not so much drama, when she and ML fall in love give them 4 to 6 months to do so. They can show some interest in each other at the start. Wish you all the best.

My Evil Genius Wife

Kamlyn

4.7

574 Chs

Liked by 8 people

Replies4

KamlynAuthor

It's true that 6 chapters are not enough to review any novel. However, I am glad that you wrote such a detailed and helpful review despite having a few chapters. I will try to keep all these things in mind while writing the story. 😊😁

4yr

KamlynAuthor

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KamlynAuthor

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Spadezzz05Lv2

it's a really interesting story so far but hv some similarities with other novel so it would be better to hv some differences nd make the fl more bold nd outgoing but i lvd the storyline so far so I'll continue reading the story nd hope to hv daily updates can't wait to read the next ch nd the intresting events being unfold in future all the best with ur writing plzzzz give daily updates [img=recommend]

4yr

Other Reviews

KamlynAuthor

So here is the shameless author with self-review. In this review, I will answer a few questions about this novel and why you should read this one. Q. Is this an original story or translation? Ans. This is my original story which I am posting it on webnovel only. So it’s not a translation, if you have any problems or questions regarding the novel, you can directly contact me using my discord ID or Instagram. Q. Why transmigration novel again? Ans. The transmigration genre might be old and cliche but it can never get outdated. This fantasy genre comes with suspense, mystery, and lots of comedic encounters. Also, it’s always fun to read and write. Q. Does this novel have two-sided transmigration just like in Eternal Love? Ans. Unfortunately not. This one only has one-sided transmigration and only one female lead. However, I can assure you that this one is gonna be a fun ride with no major misunderstanding. Q. Does the novel have villains and white lotuses? Ans. Of course. Without them, the story will become tiresome. We need an antagonist to make our leads protagonist. But thanks to these people you will get to see many face-slappings. Q. Does the character formation is based on the reader’s taste? Ans. I will say Yes. Before publishing this story, I asked my old readers a few questions about the formation of characters and framed them according to your taste. The female lead is bold, badass, and of course talented. You can get to see her character development as the story goes. The same goes for the male lead. So don’t expect everything in a few chapters. Haha, try to be a little patient. Q. How many chapters this one is going to have? Ans. Hmm...I am not sure about it yet. Maybe 300-500? However, it depends on the story of how it proceeds. Q. Is this related to Eternal Love in any way? Ans. The background world is the same but they are both different. If you haven’t read the eternal love, you can still read this one. However, I still recommend you to read Eternal love because it has a very distinct concept. Haha, promoting the other one as well. Q. Does this novel is part of WPC? Ans. Yes. The votes will be counted till 17th august only. So I request you to show this one some love just like you did to the other novel. Q. Will this one be dropped after WPC ends? Ans. The answer is no. Either I win or not, I am not going to drop this novel. Since I have started this one, I am going to complete it. I am not a reckless person to start a novel just to win a contest. Q. What is the update schedule? Ans. One chapter a day except for Thursday. The authors need some rest as well. But till the contest, the updates will be regular and the mass releases will be given frequently since it’s a new novel. Q. Can the author take criticisms? Ans. Of course. I can take all the criticisms happily unless it’s not a personal attack. I believe every reader has a right to make comments or reviews about the story and it also helps in the development of the story. It will be better if you can tone down your harsh tone and be respectful while reviewing. Haha, otherwise I can take criticisms well. Also, one more thing, I hope you won’t write reviews only to get exp points. The reviews which only have emojis with zero reading status will be deleted. I don’t want to fill the review section of this one with spams. Q. Is writing style different from the previous one? Ans. The writing style is not different but I will say it has gotten better compared to the first novel since it’s my second novel and I have got some experience in writing as well. I am trying to focus on grammatical mistakes and even if you find any, do point it. I will try to fix it as soon as possible. In the last, I hope you guys give it a read. It took me a lot of courage to start a new novel since it will be a lot of work but I had a story in mind that I wanted to share it with everyone. Also, do give a read to Eternal Love if you’re a binge reader and haven’t read that one yet.

4yr

R123Lv5

Nice novel ,author..... Can't wait for more... The plot is refresh and absolutely my type....The FL is brave and what just lacks her is power and money to put that fake princess in her place ....Can't wait to see more scenes between both of the FL and ML ....

4yr

The_EzzYLv4

I would love to read your second book author. I'm hooked with first one. The story plot of this novel is to my liking. After reading the synopsis, I fell in love with it. Can't wait to start the novel. But unfortunately exams are going. I'll start to read after my exams finishes. I'll be there with you till the end author. I'll support you go ahead and give us a good novel.[img=recommend]

4yr

SkaandyyLv13

Yo.!!! This novel is gold😍😍 The story is nothing but a breath of fresh air..Though the plot seems routine, it's the author's skills that deserves an applause❤the character design is so beautiful that u would definitely make u want more n more😅 Coming to the characters.. The FL here is one of a kind😍she's not ur typical crybaby but a savage badass girl.. she is super sweet and surpasses even the great of the great ones in the field of shamelessness😂😂hehehhe n I fell in love with her instantly💚 The ML though seems intimidating, he's adorably sweet, shy, insanely cute puppy in front of our girl🤣😘 Oh, there are also trash parents, evil stepsister, jerk ex, so we can expect a entertaining faceslaps coming our way💃 Lastly, all I wanna say is that.. this novel is godamn gripping n u feel u are watching a drama grinning like an idiot😅 Give this one a try n u find urself getting carried away in this beautiful expedition💞Great job author u got this😘

4yr

Laya28Lv10

So this is novel is all anout a Girl chasing aFter a man... tsk.. 😒😒 not good at all.. i still prefer a man who chase After the girl...😂😂

4yr

evaniLv10

ahhhh the story is A M A Z I N G. I literally cant stop to read.the storyline is so nice and refreshing.the ml is the among the best i have read so far.he is shy but mature.he is a alpha male but not a possessive dominating jerk.and woah our heroine is the cutest.she is silly abd do loads of funny and stupid things but she is definitely not a dumsel in distress.she is sass queen🥰🥰

4yr

MotnwwLv5

Hi author nice job nice story so far.. would like to request if can to have a happy ending for the FL n ML.. will they have their own little sweet home n child.. also the Manager seem quite pity background too .. can he have nice ending.. tqvm..

4yr

AarnaReddyLv6

Hello Evil Genius Readers(present and future)😈 I read the author previous book Eternal Love❤ which is really good and wonderful novel. I become addicted to it. After that I started reading this novel from the first day and believe me this is the best novel. You will crave for more chapters.🤩 I never thought that reincarnation novel will be like this. Mostly in reincarnation we found the revenge story. But in this story you find revenge😡, comedy🤣, romance😍, cuteness😊, and what not everything we can enjoy every chap whole heartedly. The author potrayed each and every character neatly and clearly. The way she wrote makes your heart flutter when there is love scene❤, it makes you cry when there is emotional scenes😭, makes you laugh hard when there is a comedy scene🤣. Her overall writing is simply superb. I observe this from her both novels. The story development is really good. The characters, locations, makes you feel it as a real.😯 The character design is the most interesting thing you will find each and every character worth in the story. Every character has a meaning in the story. Author has a way with her character design. The updates of this novel is stable and you can join privilege to enjoy advanced chapters. You will be mesmerised by the FL charm and her attitude. She is a rare gem. I love ML a lot. I know Xu nuan will kill me but it is worth it. He is really a handsome hunk. I am not saying this simply. I read her novels and you all know writing long reviews are very rare. If they wrote then it means they definitely read the novel and showing their interest and love in reviews. Occasional short reviews are also best 😁🤣😍 Keep reading, Keep voting and support the author. More love and strength to you Kamlyn. Love you❤😍😘

4yr

sazorix28Lv14

This novel is intriguing! Can’t wait to unlock all chapters and read it! I like how each character are solid and consistent with their roles. I like the flow of the story... not too fast.... not to slow... just about right... thanks dear Author for keeping the storyline alive and the characters not too overwhelming!!!

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