story itself is very interesting, but there are so many little plot holes and mistakes that it ruins the reading experience. Those plot holes don't really affect the story much, they are just extra sentences, if you remove them, the plot won't suffer, but if you include, they are plot holes... like some character moves across Milky Way galaxy in several days, and another's speed is 50x speed of light, and the author comes and says that second one is almost as fast as first one... There are also many issues regarding the English language, where the author clearly means something positive but writes negative, like he writes "couldn't agree less" instead of "couldn't agree more" when he wanted to express that character agrees to something. there are also many math issues, etc, etc... overall, if you dont care about those small mistakes that don't really affect the plot, then it's a good story
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