story itself is very interesting, but there are so many little plot holes and mistakes that it ruins the reading experience. Those plot holes don't really affect the story much, they are just extra sentences, if you remove them, the plot won't suffer, but if you include, they are plot holes... like some character moves across Milky Way galaxy in several days, and another's speed is 50x speed of light, and the author comes and says that second one is almost as fast as first one... There are also many issues regarding the English language, where the author clearly means something positive but writes negative, like he writes "couldn't agree less" instead of "couldn't agree more" when he wanted to express that character agrees to something. there are also many math issues, etc, etc... overall, if you dont care about those small mistakes that don't really affect the plot, then it's a good story

It WAS a good novel in the beginning, but it transformed from pleasant to read, fast paced story to slow passed, continues useless author narrative repeating same things without plot progression, 100 word skill names and etc. just for the sake of word count? I get it that money matters, but this is too much, I want it to be just as good if not better as it started, not just same useless bullshit narrative without plot progression in every chapter, just for the sake of word count...... Overall it is good for few hundred chapters, but after Author got fanbase he doesn't care about quality of writing or story development or anything really, other than word count, he does everything he can to fill chapter with same repeatative random bullshit just to increase word count. I read liked it a lot, but now it's just disappointing

too many plot holes... 1. law cristals just vanished without explanation... 2. I clearly remember fate and chaos were around 26% and 45% when Noah first cultivated chaos in 2nd infernal realm and now they are in single digits... 3. many others...

Thanks for the chapter ♥️♥️♥️

Very interesting story, with good character development, world building and writing quality. If you start reading, you can't stop yourself from wanting more and more chapters

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Arrows are thin and small because larger and bigger arrow is also heavier and needs more power, which normal human doesn't have, but if something has enough power like Ballista or in this case Alpha chosen (Dante), then it's not a problem

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mix of 3rd and 1st person pov, should be "in HIS usual size"

Of course, but I'm not talking about opinions, I'm talking about mistakes that have nothing to do with story/opinion and you can easily fix them, like for example changing MC mana in early chapters from 15 to 20 so that he could use that skill (that has 5 mana usage per use) 4 times, it's just simple math, not my opinion :d You can make this novel better or be satisfied as it is, it's your novel and your choice

Power stones refill daily, so if u have new chapters every day, people will give the every day, and you will go up in rankings

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The only thing preventing this novel from reaching top ranks in webnovel is its release rate. ML if you want more readers, you should release chapters at least 1 per day, trust me

Do you agree with reasoning that i have in my review?

oh, and the fact that human and goat can communicate so fluently is beyond absurd

and I'm pretty sure there can't be Angora in fantasy world, as it's a place on earth so how can there be Angorian goat??? This novel is full of holes in details, which ruin experience...

also, if he put 12 points in int, assuming 1 point gives certain number of mana, how did he get 280 mana? 280-15(previous mana)=265, 265 can't be divided by 12 (to get whole number)... check your math background author, basic math is the same in every universe

have shame, don't copy paste paragraphs from old chapters, at least change some words

few paragraphs are exactly copied from last gala, like: "the whole room was lighted by crystal chandeliers, fueled by magic, leaving no space for shadows or need of maintenance", have shame, just filling word count, at least change some words don't just copy-paste

This chapter: Jakra's mastery over origin flames can be equaled, but hardly surpassed Next chapter: Xedros has greater mastery over origin flames than Jakra... come on...