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Guntax
GuntaxLv24yr
2021-01-04 02:36

Alright, this is for the prospective readers out there who are interested in giving this book a shot. What I really admired with this book and the author is the creation of his world-building, a lot of things would scale up and gets larger as the book's plot progresses. I think the most striking protagonist is Miguel not Argus, but since both of them seems to be crucial in the development of the whole story, I think what I have interpreted so far is that Miguel and Argus is both the protagonist while there would be a villain that they go against. The latest chapters are foreshadowing this I am currently at Chapter 163. The author is very subtle about it and I think it would be the Aghorans but I wasn't so sure about it yet. About the character development, I can see the growth of Argus by him being taught by Miguel. I like how the Author combines the magical or supernatural elements of this book with the ordinary wars. Culture and traditions play a major aspect in this book. since the author is a Filipino I can say that it is based in the Philippines before the Spanish invasion. The thing that would make you want to keep reading this book is the constant guessing of what would happen next because truthfully, I cannot guess it quite well. There are some syntax and preposition mistakes but that is almost negligible and you can fully immerse yourself with the story if you are not so mindful of those. The potential of this book could've been great, but we know well what is popular right now, systems and cultivation, as of now I can see some signs that magic would also play a key role in the progress of the story. Over-all it is a nice read! Do not be dissuaded just because there are 2 MCs in this book. Well, let me guess Author? Perhaps you are either planning to separate the two or make them merge together because if that is where you plan on making it, that would really be cool!!! Thank you for giving us this book and please continue writing this book, do not drop it! That is all that I want to say, maybe as you give us more chapters I will update my review.

Veiled Saga: Conquest and Domination

Suezaro
4.7
265 Chs

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Suezaro
SuezaroAuthor

Thank you very much for this heartfelt reply. Well on several occasions I did think of dropping this book but it's with these reviews and support that I feel appreciated which makes me want to still continue. Thank you for reading my book.about the Mc's well you got a firm grasp on it but well its a secret hahaha please continue reading. the book will soon reach the end of its 1st volume. a lot of things will be sorted out, so expect a lot of clearings. once again thank you.

4yr
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Dann_Giovanni
Dann_GiovanniLv1

Veiled Saga: Conquest and Domination is a book of fiction written by Suezaro. Though the story follows a particular culture and tradition of a certain country, the author has added his own twists and turns. The book is related to the Philippines, an Asian country. The terms are described well, so no confusion can arise here. The characters are fleshed out, and for that, I would like to compliment the author! Each has their own distinguishable characteristic, making readers fall in love with the characters. Grammar is definitely the major flaw in this novel. Sometimes, phrases ended up being somewhat sentences. There are one line paragraphs that are not meant to be one line, it makes things look like a letter. Next, dialogues are great. Punctuation is superb! Commas and em dashes are used properly. If there is anything the author has to improve, that would be grammar. Have is used for present, and had is used for past. I've noticed some "haves" took the place of "hads" even if the one being referred to is past. Well, that is all I can say! Keep writing!

4yr

Azmodeus
AzmodeusLv2

Hello, Suezaro So I came from scribble Hub, I have read your story from there. At first I got furious that it only contained up to 10 chapters but I see that you have moved here. I am glad you did not drop this book because I really like this book and I want to see its end. I finally found a book to my cup of tea and am not letting you go! You should finish this book! I love how the story had progressed. I reached Chapter 42 and men I am loving the flow of the story. I want to find out what will happen next. Although the grammar is a bit rough and unpolished, well I suggest you to get yourself an editor. You are good to go. The world building is nice and the characters seems to come alive as I read them. that's all and wish you luck author! keep it up

4yr
Suezaro
SuezaroAuthor

I had this concept long before isekais were just becoming popular but life happened and I can only shelf it in my bank of novels. But now I am determined to finish this book! I will need all the support I can receive from you guys. So, for all my readers who wrote a review and commented, And those who continuously read this novel... I THANK YOU! We just created a Discord server, where we can discuss my novels and future novels. If you are interested, visit us from this link: https://discord.gg/vCk2Xe

4yr
Suezaro
SuezaroAuthor

ALRIGHT I'LL MAKE ANOTHER ANNOUNCEMENT HERE THIS IS FOR THE READERS WHO STILL DIDN'T QUITE UNDERSTOOD THE SYNOPSIS... This book shall have 2 protagonists! YES! But they will be portrayed as one and the same because they share the same body. Just imagine a person with a split personality, that's how it is. But in their case, it's two souls/spirit. Also, do note that the pace for this book is slow at the start, maybe after I reach Ch100 it shall soon start to pace faster. PLEASE, IF YOU FIND THAT THIS BOOK IS NOT YOUR CUP OF TEA JUST SKIP READING IT. YOU CAN GIVE IT A TRY BUT IF YOUR ONLY REASON FOR RATING IT LOW IS BECAUSE OF "THEY SWAPS" THEN BY ALL MEANS DON'T WASTE YOUR PRECIOUS TIME READING THIS. DESPITE THAT, I STILL GIVE MY WARM THANKS FOR EVERYONE WHO TOOK THEIR TIME TO READ MY BOOK EVEN IF THEY JUST GLANCED IT. SORRY IF I BETRAYED YOUR EXPECTATIONS. This is my first book. That would be all, have a nice day!

4yr
Daron
DaronLv10

So a General huh? Then we can expect an expert in warfare? Also I noticed some Filipino terms... Author san must be a Filipino? Kamusta tol! Hanep galing mo magenglish haha So far from the chapters released, it was a great one. More chapters please! And Author-san! Keep up the good work. You should add a book cover too, so that other readers would be much interested on your novel.

4yr
Sweet_Innocense
Sweet_InnocenseLv1

The characters themselves come across as though they are real life people, the author's words are able to create an image so real it's beautiful. The complexity is just as pleasing to read as anything else, and more than anything else, it's a joy to read.

4yr
CacackleLasson
CacackleLassonLv1

Im at 30 something and the author seems to have pacing issues, thus far Im still at the slave life, they introduce this character and that, what they eat, then they do battle some crocs then they talk about the origin of the world and such then he talks about his wife. I was waiting for something to happen, but thus far there was nothing happening, it felt like a filler most of them, well they might develop the world and the characters but it felt too dragged out. There has been no interesting enemies thus far and I still can't see any clear conflict on anything. I imagine at this point he should have a few bands of warriors with him, and his problems has no sense of urgency. Well hes a slave but he is well taken care of, if he was complacent he could just stay here and live as much as he wanted, the MC has literally no reason to go rogue or rebel, except of he wanted to. Since there is no pressure I find it not engaging for me at least.

4yr
SilentMild
SilentMildLv6

Noice, tol! May you finish this story and refine it well. Can't wait to read the complete and polished version. Padrop na rin please ng initial review, WAR GROUNDS (all caps na version). Cheers!

4yr
TaintedMetal
TaintedMetalLv2

An engaging read. The first chapter puts you straight into the action and the story builds up from there. The characters are also unique with their own characteristics. Looking forward to more chapters.

4yr
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