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2021-01-10 15:53

An arsed book unfortunately. In all seriousness I just couldn't get passed "arsed" in every other paragraph. Extrenely repeated words are jarring and moreso uncommom ones. I liked where it was going but it was to annoying to read.

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Suezaro
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okay :> I'll try to improve

Suezaro
SuezaroAuthor

have u tried reading the latest chaps or at least the premium ones? I do admit I was so lacking when I started.

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Guntax
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Alright, this is for the prospective readers out there who are interested in giving this book a shot. What I really admired with this book and the author is the creation of his world-building, a lot of things would scale up and gets larger as the book's plot progresses. I think the most striking protagonist is Miguel not Argus, but since both of them seems to be crucial in the development of the whole story, I think what I have interpreted so far is that Miguel and Argus is both the protagonist while there would be a villain that they go against. The latest chapters are foreshadowing this I am currently at Chapter 163. The author is very subtle about it and I think it would be the Aghorans but I wasn't so sure about it yet. About the character development, I can see the growth of Argus by him being taught by Miguel. I like how the Author combines the magical or supernatural elements of this book with the ordinary wars. Culture and traditions play a major aspect in this book. since the author is a Filipino I can say that it is based in the Philippines before the Spanish invasion. The thing that would make you want to keep reading this book is the constant guessing of what would happen next because truthfully, I cannot guess it quite well. There are some syntax and preposition mistakes but that is almost negligible and you can fully immerse yourself with the story if you are not so mindful of those. The potential of this book could've been great, but we know well what is popular right now, systems and cultivation, as of now I can see some signs that magic would also play a key role in the progress of the story. Over-all it is a nice read! Do not be dissuaded just because there are 2 MCs in this book. Well, let me guess Author? Perhaps you are either planning to separate the two or make them merge together because if that is where you plan on making it, that would really be cool!!! Thank you for giving us this book and please continue writing this book, do not drop it! That is all that I want to say, maybe as you give us more chapters I will update my review.

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