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Review Detail of Ela_Aesthete in Oblitus Regina [Forgotten Queen]

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Ela_Aesthete
Ela_AestheteLv13yrEla_Aesthete

An intriguing novel. I like the way that the plot is unique yet also relatable. Overall it's great and recommendable but I'll give it a 4.6 A few scenes were cliche and some details were unrealistic. The sentences were beautifully crafted but few subtle errors are present. For a first book, I guess that's understandable. Above all, I see improvement chapter by chapter. The more the situation escalates into another level, the more you will get immmersed into the story! Given the main character, you will surely feel as if you're in her shoes! Love, forgotten memories, friendship, assassination, deceit, I love it. Great writing quality, great character development, great stunts, great twists! And most importantly, the author's message is well-delivered. I see good things ahead of you. Keep up the good work, miss author! ^_^

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Oblitus Regina [Forgotten Queen]

Elise_Aigasaki

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Ela_Aesthete
Ela_AestheteLv1Ela_Aesthete

Don't fret much about quality tho, it's only natural. Completing a story is a huge milestone already. If you have too much on your plate, you can hire an editor to revise it for you.

Elise_Aigasaki
Elise_AigasakiAuthorElise_Aigasaki

Thank you for the support and everything! I'm thinking of rebooting it since the writing quality is not that great, so I hope you would continue to support it until then!

Elise_Aigasaki
Elise_AigasakiAuthorElise_Aigasaki

I will think of hiring an editor then, but I'll probably reboot it

Ela_Aesthete:Don't fret much about quality tho, it's only natural. Completing a story is a huge milestone already. If you have too much on your plate, you can hire an editor to revise it for you.