An intriguing novel. I like the way that the plot is unique yet also relatable. Overall it's great and recommendable but I'll give it a 4.6 A few scenes were cliche and some details were unrealistic. The sentences were beautifully crafted but few subtle errors are present. For a first book, I guess that's understandable. Above all, I see improvement chapter by chapter. The more the situation escalates into another level, the more you will get immmersed into the story! Given the main character, you will surely feel as if you're in her shoes! Love, forgotten memories, friendship, assassination, deceit, I love it. Great writing quality, great character development, great stunts, great twists! And most importantly, the author's message is well-delivered. I see good things ahead of you. Keep up the good work, miss author! ^_^

I just completed reading all the chapters and let me tell you, I was in love with it. The story development along with the characters is really intriguing. Definitely recommendable!! Keep up the great work author ❤❤❤

I've read 3 chapters so far and this story looks pretty good! I like the main character. She doesn't take rubbish from anyone, she stands her ground, and I feel like I can relate to her. The only thing I didn't like was the grammar. It wasn't terrible but it could use some work. Overall, this story was pretty good!

The story is quite interesting. It's not your typical story. I like their personalities and how they react to certain things though there are some things that needed improvements like some words are being repetitive. Overall, a good story. Keep up the good work author! 👍👍

I like this book because it’s not that cliche and for me the story development is really good. Describing the background or where they are can really help btw! For me, more description to the world background that’s all. The writing quality, character design and story development is all great!!! Keep up, hope you make more updates! :D

Pros: The story is indeed good and enjoyable, I very much liked it. The characters have their own uniqueness which mixes well with the whole story. The only thing I can say for the opposite is that, indeed, the grammar is correct but it's a bit... rough? The sentences have too many pronouns or nouns. For example, the I's in every beginning of the sentences, but as the story goes on, it becomes better. I'm loving the book more and more, I hope you keep writing 😊

Enjoyed while reading it. I like how the story is flowing slowly and how you have described the appearance and behavior of the characters of your novel. Nice work

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Hello author! I liked the title and also the cover. It's really catchy. Like you'll be curious as to what the story is about based on the title and cover. All in all, my reading experience is great. The story is still on going, so i bet many amazing things are yet to be unfold in the future updates. I will definitely keep this in my library to keep me updated. Just lemme give my observation first. Character design here, for me, needs work. Adding descriptive words more can help. Spacing also is needed in the story. I can also see a few Tagalog words, and Filipinisms. Just be careful with that. You should also be careful w/ the grammar. Also their actions and emotions. I think it also needs work by, again, adding descriptive words to it. ☺️ In short, all needs work in terms of details even in minor ones for the readers to really have a vivid picture of what's going on in the story. ☺️ The story has a potential. Keep improving. ❤️❤️❤️