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2020-08-25 16:32

I like this book because it’s not that cliche and for me the story development is really good. Describing the background or where they are can really help btw! For me, more description to the world background that’s all. The writing quality, character design and story development is all great!!! Keep up, hope you make more updates! :D

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I'll keep that in mind. Thanks for the advice, and I hope you enjoy reading it!

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