Review Detail of plainolme in The Forgotten Memories : SHIO KAIBA
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Story starts off kind of slow but builds up to something intriguing. My only suggestion would be to check your spelling and grammar. Sometimes it gets a little hard to understand.
The Forgotten Memories : SHIO KAIBA
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Thanks for the honest feedback! That not exactly what im looking for but im expecting a review like that. I admit that I made the start off slow to introduce characters, but im happy to know that the build up is pretty well. Im going to rewrite some parts on future for better spelling and grammar :) thanks for the feedback!