Review Detail of MellowGuy in Level Up Legacy
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Hello. Author is here again with another review. I think there are more than 180 chapters right now, so I thought more people need to see this. Read the first review to understand the gist of my novel. I admit that the first volume, that is 52 chapters, is not as ideal as it can be. Some people mentioned that vagueness of the novel, but there's a mystery tag so you'd have to stick around to understand everything this novel is about. Others mentioned plot-armor, which I find not as overused as they think. There are many things that are a foreshadowing for later events and everything would be linked together. Anyone who read until the latest chapters knows that some of those events happened for a reason the MC didn't know about. There's some change in POVs that happened early on, but would get very rare later. Please understand. Thank you. I just wanted to clairfy this so that you, whoever is interested, to give this novel a chance to prove itself.
Level Up Legacy
MellowGuy
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DaoistFreddieG:Lol your Cover š¤£š¤£. I hope you play League cause āhasagi!ā
I just finished the 1st volume,to be honest its a mess.the fate and destiny thing is a big turn off,the way the mystery is being delivered its kinda mehhh,it is not interesting.and the plot,I dont to be negative but it will turn the readers away.for the first timers give this novel a go but for me I will leave it in my library that if i have time i will continue reading this. Good luck with your novel. 7/10 Give this novel a chance
You have every right to. I myself admit that the first volume was rushed and could have been better. I do promise that the story gets better, but who am I to give such guarntees? Thank you for reading and being so polite about it.
Mr_HonestReview:I just finished the 1st volume,to be honest its a mess.the fate and destiny thing is a big turn off,the way the mystery is being delivered its kinda mehhh,it is not interesting.and the plot,I dont to be negative but it will turn the readers away.for the first timers give this novel a go but for me I will leave it in my library that if i have time i will continue reading this. Good luck with your novel. 7/10 Give this novel a chance
i do think i will give this a try. it seems you are learning as you go so iām gonna try to stick around i havenāt seen many recent reviews so itās hard to judge what its like now but from the old ones it doesnāt seem bad so iāll try it out.
MellowGuy:You have every right to. I myself admit that the first volume was rushed and could have been better. I do promise that the story gets better, but who am I to give such guarntees? Thank you for reading and being so polite about it.
