the sudden shift of the mood is kinda off-putting.. the plot armor thickens

Just curious, what is your ethnicity author? like your ancestor's origin.

I know it's already too late but here is my two cents, the sudden shift of mc's character is too abrupt and unlogical. It's like with a snap of a finger he is a new person(ego). my suggestion is make a timeline. like months or days

If the mc become cringe, oa, or 1 dimension character, I'mma drop this

I dropped it...Dude I'll be frank with you... Your novel doesn't belong here.... it should be animated or atleast a live action... the story have a lot of potential and it can only be expressed fully if it's adapted as a series. I can't really read it.... it's like I'm going to be spoiled from a great movie

thank you for the chapter author... I don't know how much you earn on this novel or if you're earning anything... but if your earnings is enough, I hope you make it a full time work/hobby, more frequent update. One of the reasons why readers are dropping novels is because the updates are slow... good thing is every chapters are good and worth the read.

too edgy

pacing is too slow

Bulshido

Did you watched every naruto movies, ovas, arc, and Shippuden? Because if you haven't, you definitely should, especially the episodes before shippuden. You can get a lot of writing materials and ideas, like the stone of gelel, chakra armour, hero water, nine masked beast, chimera techniques, and shiromari. I just wanna spam a 5star

Did you watched every naruto movies, ovas, arc, and Shippuden? Because if you haven't, you definitely should, especially the episodes before shippuden. You can get a lot of writing materials and ideas, like the stone of gelel, chakra armour, hero water, nine masked beast, chimera techniques, and shiromari.

question, what do you get if I'am gifting you power stones?

Chapter 387... Dude, of all the Naruto fanfics, yours is the best. I can even put this fanfic in top 10 ranking in original novels. And as a naruto fan since 2005, I can say you did good. Fight scenes are superb, writing quality✅, world background✅, flesh-out side characters✅, and the plot is good. the mc got his strength through hardwork,no bs plot armor. kuddos to that... We can also see that you are putting a lot of effort and a lot of braincells into this fic. And We really appreciate that... So thank you for making this fic

dude, of all the Naruto fanfics, yours is the best. I can even put this fanfic in top 10 in original novels. And as a naruto fan since 2005, I can say you did good. Fight scenes are superb, writing quality✅, world background✅, flesh-out side characters✅, and the plot is good. the mc got his strength through hardwork,no bs plot armor. kuddos to that... We can also see that you are putting a lot of effort and a lot of braincells into this fic. And We really appreciate that... So thank you for making this fic

we are almost at Chapter 1500, so it's time to make sunny OP, he is always tired and everyone can kick his ass,Lololol... so pls author.....

I agree with his review and I just want to add some more perspective. As a reader I can't feel anything while reading your work. At first I was excited, a mech apocalypse what an interesting premise, I thought. And then when he got to the settlement everything becomes bland, 120 chapters and he is still in the settlement. You haven't even explored what other advantages he got. I don't want to lower your star review so I wont drop a review with stars, but my honest review is 4stars only. I also like fast paced novels and yours is too slow for me so imma drop it at chap 150, good luck though.

I'am really confused on your decisions. like dudeeeee, expaaaanndddd the environment, be creative. It's freaking fantasy dungeon and you just copy pasted your environment.

Author I hope you read this. My true rating is 4.4 but I saw your pitiful overall rating so i decided to improve it a little. It is a good dungeon novel but not enough to be on the top. I think your fighting scene is too long and sometimes you took atleast 10 chapters for just a mini boss fight to conclude. One more thing, I don't particularly like your dungeon set up, it's chaotic and there is no order and logical reasoning on it, Like glaze to forest to interior of the caste? to interior of the castle? to an Ice cavern? last one, your dungeon is already in the cold environment and then the theme of your dungeon is still cold. And I know that Niflheim is on the title but dude, make it warmer. Imagine, you can find a warm place in the coldest place/continent which is the dungeon. It will lure more adventurer for its uniquenes, relative to the environment. If you know Danmachi you can get my point. Remember, a dungeon novel is a sandbox novel, so make a world. Good Luck. I'am writing and giving reviews so I can improve my english. So pls rate my english.

did he syphon the souls?

for a genius person, he is kinda stupid. with the knowledge of the future he can't even stop a plot.