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2020-10-22 14:22

The whole story is really well-developed. Neither too slow or fast. The fact that Eve just trusts on herself and very few people is the key point of her success. Also the fact that she does not overlook the evilness or schemes of the supposed-to-be heroine shows that she is not someone who is blinded by the settings of the novel that she is in.

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Thank you again 💓 seeing the readers enjoy my first novel really brings strength and motivation to continue and improve my writing. hehe 😋 please continue supporting Evelyn 😉

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