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_raidha_Lv44yr
2020-10-06 15:41

The story line is clear cut. Like even when reading the chapter, you don't have to pause for a bit to get the whole plot. A smooth writing. I really love how Eve is independent and gathers her own men. She doesn't trust anyone easily and also it is quite realistic that she is still wary of her family and the other male characters, except for Gab. I love how she takes a stance in the most poised manner and has unique "nicknames" for the other male leads....(lol) Overall, it is a good read with a strong female lead. Given the fact that there is reincarnation, I love how there was no truck-san here, rather a deep story of betrayal and insecurity which can is a trait of Eve. Also there is a deep story of the side characters, starting with the demise of her mother, her brother's behavior, her father's negligence, even outsiders' stares and ridicule. However, she is growing and every struggle is shown here.... Will be waiting for the updates!!!!!

I Don’t Want This Bad Ending

MyCatPaws
4.6
228 Chs

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MyCatPaws
MyCatPawsAuthor

Thank you so much dear reader ❤️ I hope you enjoyed reading my first novel. I would be thankful if you keep on supporting this work of mine. [img=recommend]

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_raidha_
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ofcourse... also I kinda have editted or reviewed some novels on different online platforms. So if you need any help in that case, I'll surely be there [img=recommend]

MyCatPaws:Thank you so much dear reader ❤️ I hope you enjoyed reading my first novel. I would be thankful if you keep on supporting this work of mine. [img=recommend]
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rosaline16
rosaline16Lv1

is she turning out to be the fl

4yr
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DaoistsMRElQ
DaoistsMRElQLv2

im just starting to read the book.. but so far the reviews are delicious .. thank you for the hard work👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

1yr
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ines_mt
ines_mtLv11

Very promising work! I like how bold and strong the MC is. I hope she doesn’t give in to any male lead and stays true to her beliefs I can’t wait to see the outcome.

4yr

Lyaiya
LyaiyaLv11

I really enjoyed reading this novel. It suits my taste and is just what I was looking for! The updating schedule is very convenient and stays consistent. I am really excited for future chapters to come!

4yr
MyCatPaws
MyCatPawsAuthor

Hi Everyone! Author here 👋 I’ll shamelessly give a rate for my book lol. I just want to say my thanks to those who read this story of mine. ❤️ Please do comment and give your reviews for this book. I’ll give my all to writing every chapters with interesting storyline. Thanks you readers ❤️👏🏻🙏🏻

4yr
Ymonnie_Forde
Ymonnie_FordeLv1

As the author/ translator you should pay attention to your pronouns. Half the time I wonder "when did she start talking to a girl?" When in fact she's speaking to a male. Sometimes I forget that Gab is a boy because all the pronouns you use are feminine. The world building needs work and the grammar also needs working on. All in all its a good story. It's just a bit confusing sometimes with the errors

4yr
DawnXiexi
DawnXiexiLv12

This is so good more than i expected, I thought it will be a boring and too dramatic..But i didn't expect that this is well written,i like how the author portray the characters.I love all of them.. Read u'll not regret😍..

4yr
JP_TransLaLa
JP_TransLaLaLv2

Aha! A Villainess reincarnation novel where not everything is already in her favor. She faces betrayal, heartache, and the crushing weight of knowing her impending fate. I can't wait to read more!

4yr
pokachi_
pokachi_Lv11

Like like like this one.. but that shitty father, shitty brother even the sc*m finance of mc really make my anger rise up whenever they appears in the content (their character make my dirty side to pop up my mouth can't stop crushing them)

4yr
RatselRiya
RatselRiyaLv5

just started reading....it's a good book😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
lYuren
lYurenLv5

whoooo an isekai genre, I have read many isekai genre a numerous times, some are cliche, some are traditional or the trending ones, for this one it is very unexpected. I like how the MC wanted to be liberated to her bad ending and specially how u describe magic and battle scenes. It is very refreshing to see such detailed battle scene and world building of magic, tho I commented some paragraph with small error please do not mind. I am engrossed to your story that's why I saw those errors but overall this is a good story~ Looking forward how will you bring the bad end to a good one? Will it be cliche, traditional or will give you me surprise, I am very eager to find out~

4yr
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