Review Detail of AllFiction in The Bloody Emissary of Justice

(Written in Google Translate) So far, the only criticism I have for the story is the short chapters, with an extremely slow development. This is becoming irritating, for example: a scene that could supposedly occur in the next chapter, takes more than 2/3 because of the absolutely huge explanations, which cover the extremely small chapter and leave 0 space for Development, or even, the lack of development itself, which is filling words or situations that almost nobody cares about.