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Uraidi
UraidiLv154yr
2020-11-08 07:03

i just skip reading, but i think you must get editor, man. i mean its little hard to read to me (i dont know anyone else) and dont have what i call story "flow". english is not my language so its bit hard to explain, but i think your punctuation need improvement

The Strategist That Succeed With Gallant Power

ArkAnghel
4.6
230 Chs

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ArkAnghel
ArkAnghelAuthor

Aight thanks for the review glad that you said that because thats my weakness cause english is also not my first language but thanks for that I can improve.

4yr
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FaKie_KitSuKo
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i really like the background and the story development i always have interest on wars and such yet i havent really found any story that made im interested in it this is by far the first one im interested in i haven't read all the chapters but by far i love it

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Jacket_Josh
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Incredible story, with great developments, characters, and world building ironically out of this world! 100% Recommend to anyone starting here looking for a gripping narrative!

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Faura_Phoe
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Woah! I was skeptical since I often read female leads more often, but this isn't that bad at all! The plot was interesting and detailed. The characters are well thought out. Despite not having been as interested from the synopsis, I'm rather hooked onto it!

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ArkAnghel
ArkAnghelAuthor

Heyy guys more to come just keep looking at it hehehez maybe soon enough one of your suggestion would be put at the novel :) and also to boost my passion I need you guys!

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LordPotatoTheSixth
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All I want to say is...... AWESOME! My interest was piqued from the prologue itself. The eay of writing... The definition of the change and how the author described the beginning of the new Era......It was all EPIC. I haven't read much chapters yet.....but i feel like doing this......You will know why.....Just read the prologue and then try to get out of that world.....I would give candies as a gift if you could pull it off XD. Anyways the Writing Quality is awesome with little to no mistakes. There are little typos here and there but i guess they exist in many novels if not every. And the stability of updates..... I don't think you need to know my opinions as you could see it on the cover page.... 14 CHAPTERS PER WEEK! And that's plenty even if you compare it with old novels ( I am talking about novels and not fanfics as the writers of fanfics go all out and can pull 21 chapters a week too). So what's the conclusion? ... WHAT ARE YOU STILL DOING HERE? GO AND READ THE NOVEL ALREADY FOR GOD'S SAKE.... Bai Bai

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mariaajv
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I like how interesting tge story is! With the very first, it's wonderful and attracts the readers' attention by the unique flow of events every chapters and how it presented the characters. Keep writing!

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TheOrb
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I really likes this novel and i believe you will be too. The character background and development has such good stories, AND it's easy to understand. One in million type of author right here. The mc is very talented to the some point some might even call him a "prodigy"

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JP_TransLaLa
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Reading this webnovel is like throwing yourself into the middle of Sun Tzu's The Art of War. There are kingdoms and strife, a glorious Emperor, and so many descriptive battles, tactics, and strategies that it leaves your head spinning!

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daphneanmarcia
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Reveal spoiler

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Dredaice
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Very very good like everything make more like this, it's very entertaining... and I like the way he constructed his words, I just kept reading it.

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