Writing Quality: Errors are few and none are jarring enough to break immersion. Stability Of Updates: Updates occurred fairly frequently, but without a set schedule, the time between updates becoming more spread out as the story progressed. Story Development: Was fairly decent, though a little narrow. Could have used some exposition occasionally. Character Design: Fairly good, but also fairly one-dimensional due to locking people into flame stereotypes which removed any uniqueness. More development would have been nice. World Background: This was supposed to be a massive crossover world, but turned into DxD with irrelevant HP world and four chapters where Bloodbourne made a brief appearance but affected nothing where only DxD plot mattered. That being said, A lot was written about Romania which in the original series was mostly irrelevant other than the fact that Valerie and Gasper came from there. So all in all, a little good - a little bad. Overall: Fairly good, but not multi-read good. Which considering the amount of horrible writing i've seen on this site, means this is in the top 10th percentile.
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