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BoredAsura
BoredAsuraAuthor3yrBoredAsura

This is the most shameful author. Not gonna lie. Not gonna exaggerate. This is going to be a book as popular as the bible in a few hundred years. Read now so you can become one of the leaders of the cults that will happen

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The X-Gene of Fate

BoredAsura

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bomb_1466
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Eh it seems good but something seems of about it that gives me bad vibes keep doing you tho author my opinion doesn't make the fanfic any less good to others as long as they are capable of independent thought

BoredAsura
BoredAsuraAuthorBoredAsura

Why?

bomb_1466:Eh it seems good but something seems of about it that gives me bad vibes keep doing you tho author my opinion doesn't make the fanfic any less good to others as long as they are capable of independent thought
bomb_1466
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Idk honestly its just vibes I'm getting lol nothing against the artist or story Its just me who knows that might change as the story continues but right now I just can't immerse myself Into it Lmfao I can read it Its just I get this bad empty feeling when I do

BoredAsura
BoredAsuraAuthorBoredAsura

Cool. Didn't take any offense at all. Was just curious about what got you that feeling that way

bomb_1466:Idk honestly its just vibes I'm getting lol nothing against the artist or story Its just me who knows that might change as the story continues but right now I just can't immerse myself Into it Lmfao I can read it Its just I get this bad empty feeling when I do
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5PsyLoRD

He is/will be a hero? (Good alignment)

BoredAsura:Cool. Didn't take any offense at all. Was just curious about what got you that feeling that way
BoredAsura
BoredAsuraAuthorBoredAsura

I mean... a Paladin is good for their god but may be considered evil to the religion of another god. If you are asking if he will be slaughtering people by the hundreds, then no, he is good. If you are asking if he will be spiderman level good, then no, he is bad.

PsyLoRD:He is/will be a hero? (Good alignment)
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5PsyLoRD

As long as he does not go something like 'killing is wrong' 'doing this is bad' 'doing that whatever' BS you can count on me to eagerly read until the end. Example: Shirou from fate and his overly-idealistic (Stupid) view.

BoredAsura:I mean... a Paladin is good for their god but may be considered evil to the religion of another god. If you are asking if he will be slaughtering people by the hundreds, then no, he is good. If you are asking if he will be spiderman level good, then no, he is bad.
BoredAsura
BoredAsuraAuthorBoredAsura

I will say who one of his servants are to show you how they will influence him if you want to know. Since he is still young, his first 4 or 5 servants will really affect his personality growing up.

PsyLoRD:As long as he does not go something like 'killing is wrong' 'doing this is bad' 'doing that whatever' BS you can count on me to eagerly read until the end. Example: Shirou from fate and his overly-idealistic (Stupid) view.
Zerak
ZerakLv11Zerak

I’ll start reading this soon, as according to your warnings, we don’t have to worry about him somehow sleeping with black widow, it will actually be non canon (all fanfic should be non canon or at least deviate) and you won’t have a massive harem.

BoredAsura
BoredAsuraAuthorBoredAsura

Correct to all of the above. While I will follow some events of marvel, i will also create many of my own or change how some events occur.

Zerak:I’ll start reading this soon, as according to your warnings, we don’t have to worry about him somehow sleeping with black widow, it will actually be non canon (all fanfic should be non canon or at least deviate) and you won’t have a massive harem.
Zerak
ZerakLv11Zerak

Some events are always bound to happen since even if the MC affected the timeline those events were set into motion long before they were born or came into that world. For example in it was the MCU, the convergence that happened in Thor 2 will always happen, what happens during those events though might be different because of the affect the MC had on the world. The Iron man stuff could be slightly different or vastly different. Hydra being part of shield is inevitable if the MC isn’t alive during WW2, but depending on the MC the events should be different depending on his level of involvement with shield. I absolutely hate it when the MC creates a simple effect but the same events still somehow happen. Or when an author lets a guy live even though the MC would have normal killed them just because they want to use that bad guy later or because that bad guy is the one who starts a plot line.

BoredAsura:Correct to all of the above. While I will follow some events of marvel, i will also create many of my own or change how some events occur.
BoredAsura
BoredAsuraAuthorBoredAsura

Exactly. I understand that the MC is not the center of the universe and not every event that he might get involved in or not involved in, is about him. He will eventually kill but for now, he will be a child. But as a realistic mutant who is taught by killers and heroes of the past, it is inevitable that people will die by his hands or orders

Zerak:Some events are always bound to happen since even if the MC affected the timeline those events were set into motion long before they were born or came into that world. For example in it was the MCU, the convergence that happened in Thor 2 will always happen, what happens during those events though might be different because of the affect the MC had on the world. The Iron man stuff could be slightly different or vastly different. Hydra being part of shield is inevitable if the MC isn’t alive during WW2, but depending on the MC the events should be different depending on his level of involvement with shield. I absolutely hate it when the MC creates a simple effect but the same events still somehow happen. Or when an author lets a guy live even though the MC would have normal killed them just because they want to use that bad guy later or because that bad guy is the one who starts a plot line.
Zerak
ZerakLv11Zerak

I was just giving an example. As for the killing. Idk why most MC are Pacifists or Genocidal if you look at it from an objective point of view, killing every enemy makes them desperate an extremist when they fight you since they know you kill all bad guys. And killing no one means they can get away with anything. People like the joker from Batman that just want to see the world burn, should be kill on sight. And anyone attacking you with the intent to kill you should fight with the intent to kill (I mean use lethal force, you don’t have to Always kill them), if a bad guy attacks only hero’s and doesn’t go after family or bystanders with intent to kill, then you fight them with the intent to kill (don’t hold back) but if you win and they aren’t dead you don’t need to finish them off. So what I am saying is you shouldn’t hold back your Punches if the other guy isn’t, but once the fight is over, evaluate what they did and why they did it. For example the person might be hunting down people for revenge (which while not a good thin is also not a bad thing), which means he doesn’t just kill anyone. Therefore unless he is after uninvolved people like the innocent family of the people who wronged him/her or someone you care about, no need to resort to extramarital punishment. Killing lightly is bad but not killing at all is also bad. A balance is needed. For example when the teens of the brotherhood and the x-men fight when they are kids I don’t think killing is needed (I haven’t read the comics so I don’t know how bad it got so I am not 100% sure if killing is not needed)

BoredAsura:Exactly. I understand that the MC is not the center of the universe and not every event that he might get involved in or not involved in, is about him. He will eventually kill but for now, he will be a child. But as a realistic mutant who is taught by killers and heroes of the past, it is inevitable that people will die by his hands or orders
CliffkunLolRekt
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I’m just checking you won’t hurt the mcs wifus in any way or ntr the mc this has the dark tag I’m just bieng extra careful

BoredAsura
BoredAsuraAuthorBoredAsura

I mean... ntr? No.

CliffkunLolRekt:I’m just checking you won’t hurt the mcs wifus in any way or ntr the mc this has the dark tag I’m just bieng extra careful
noobageddon_
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Is mc op?

Hakkira
HakkiraLv14Hakkira

You got moxie author! Your warning list and this review have convinced me to at least check your story out so well done so far 😉

SunWu_Monkey
SunWu_MonkeyLv2SunWu_Monkey

Okay, I see the child protagonist tag,just curious,u keeping him a kid for ur entire book???????????

The_Merchant
The_MerchantLv5The_Merchant

So where can i sign up in this cult?

BoredAsura
BoredAsuraAuthorBoredAsura

I'm not founding it or in charge of it. I just write the holy text. You can make yourself pope if you want. But some may challenge you for your rank

The_Merchant:So where can i sign up in this cult?