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Primordiales
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2020-08-12 22:41

Nothing new, what do you want me to tell you. What will happen now for sure is, he will continue to act like sasuke, he will be friends with Naruto or if he is not a friend they will talk as close acquaintances, his partner will be sakura for sure, he will continue most of the time the canon and then he will go with orochimaru to leave konoha and maybe he will take sakura with the speculation why the author surely did not like that he stayed in the village while she is his final partner ..... .. ...... everything I said is my speculation is not true, I did not read it but I no longer liked it, almost wish, if it had been him, I would have already asked for evolution, every level of power it evolves and gives it a new power, so at first it is weak but then it will be op ... but no, just go with the wood style, pure cliché, I don't understand why they always do the same thing, it bores me to always read the same thing, that's why I always pay attention the wishes to see if I have to leave it before reading an atrocity ... Bye have a good day I will not read this until I have a qualify tion with valid arguments after reading 20 chapters, have a good morning ...

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Crook_Shank
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Thanks for your honest opinion brother, Actually you have somewhat right, but your prediction of the story is wrong. The story will totally change from the chunin exam third phase. You wil see. Just read from "True Sage" chapter. Thats where it starts truly changing. You are wrong about him following Orochi. You will understand that in the Konoha crush chapter. He's already strong enough to face him. I don't wish to add more spoilers. Its up to you. Anyway, It's just my first time writing. I'll try to improve more on the way. Thank you for your support.

Primordiales
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I see, it's good that I don't go with Orochimaru it would be too boring, but surely the other thing I said will not change, I always wondered if the authors like to kill characters, Naruto uzumaki became who he is today thanks to abuse already the cold looks of people trying to gain recognition was his motivation to be the hokage, if you take away all that would happen ?, that's why I don't like that they are friends of naruto, for me they kill the character that I liked, naruto is the character of the overcoming that everything can be done with effort or at least that is what I would say if there were no naruto shippuden .... as for sakura better, let's not talk to that crazy woman I hate her since chapter 1 of naruto and I hate her more in shippuden When I declare false love to Naruto, everything he did for her, he only responded with false love to leave with the avenging emo to kill her with a smash, but what I hated the most is the end of Naruto, God as hell can marry hinata, many may like it but I personally disgusting ... he is the worst character in history, I like the hinata of little naruto more, at the time when he fought with neji then the character became super boring, they made him a secondary character and just She appeared as the protagonist in the super forced movie, and let's forget that she sacrificed her life for Naruto and this clown ignored her and didn't say thank you, but she didn't follow her owner like a puppy, she followed him from behind, that's something that i hated, to top it neji my favorite character destroyed by the author died, for what? just for a ****ty shipp, god how i hate naruto series, the only good thing it has is little naruto, the fights, then it's all betrayals, plot holes, unnecessary UPS powers, wasted characters, super thick plot armor, and above all senseless deaths, senseless characters, senseless wasted skills, meaningless conclusions, in the end it's garbage, I don't know why it has such an impact when it sucks, to top it off I have to read it in fanfics for people to destroy it more only because of his trash ..... well no matter what I mean is that I do not like Naruto, more if you only follow the story for fear of changing something, also the character I like the most is Sasuke, I see Naruto very generic, the typical good, tragic past, excessive plot armor, secret pasts, unknown relatives etc ... if I weren't Japanese I would say that Naruto is almost a character in a Chinese story, he only needed to kill senseless and that he finds young It is arrogant teachers, hahaha ........ have a good day I will remove this rating until they tell me that what I said in this comment does not exist in this novel .. sorry if I offended you verti all my hatred for ma series and the garbage fanfics in this comment ....

Crook_Shank:Thanks for your honest opinion brother, Actually you have somewhat right, but your prediction of the story is wrong. The story will totally change from the chunin exam third phase. You wil see. Just read from "True Sage" chapter. Thats where it starts truly changing. You are wrong about him following Orochi. You will understand that in the Konoha crush chapter. He's already strong enough to face him. I don't wish to add more spoilers. Its up to you. Anyway, It's just my first time writing. I'll try to improve more on the way. Thank you for your support.
Crook_Shank
Crook_ShankAuthor

Ya you are right about the whole thing. Sasuke will support Naruto in the main series as well after the ninja war. I just made him support him earlier. Naruto has already lived his tragic past and wants to be Hokage. Sasuke and Naruto will become truly op expecially sasuke after the timeskip. And start of shippuden. I'll not follow the main story of Shippuden and the Akatsuki will be ****ed up. There will be a few surprises as well. The ninja war will definately happen as well, but not like in the anime. Stay tuned for the release of Volume 2. Which is Shippuden.

Primordiales:I see, it's good that I don't go with Orochimaru it would be too boring, but surely the other thing I said will not change, I always wondered if the authors like to kill characters, Naruto uzumaki became who he is today thanks to abuse already the cold looks of people trying to gain recognition was his motivation to be the hokage, if you take away all that would happen ?, that's why I don't like that they are friends of naruto, for me they kill the character that I liked, naruto is the character of the overcoming that everything can be done with effort or at least that is what I would say if there were no naruto shippuden .... as for sakura better, let's not talk to that crazy woman I hate her since chapter 1 of naruto and I hate her more in shippuden When I declare false love to Naruto, everything he did for her, he only responded with false love to leave with the avenging emo to kill her with a smash, but what I hated the most is the end of Naruto, God as hell can marry hinata, many may like it but I personally disgusting ... he is the worst character in history, I like the hinata of little naruto more, at the time when he fought with neji then the character became super boring, they made him a secondary character and just She appeared as the protagonist in the super forced movie, and let's forget that she sacrificed her life for Naruto and this clown ignored her and didn't say thank you, but she didn't follow her owner like a puppy, she followed him from behind, that's something that i hated, to top it neji my favorite character destroyed by the author died, for what? just for a ****ty shipp, god how i hate naruto series, the only good thing it has is little naruto, the fights, then it's all betrayals, plot holes, unnecessary UPS powers, wasted characters, super thick plot armor, and above all senseless deaths, senseless characters, senseless wasted skills, meaningless conclusions, in the end it's garbage, I don't know why it has such an impact when it sucks, to top it off I have to read it in fanfics for people to destroy it more only because of his trash ..... well no matter what I mean is that I do not like Naruto, more if you only follow the story for fear of changing something, also the character I like the most is Sasuke, I see Naruto very generic, the typical good, tragic past, excessive plot armor, secret pasts, unknown relatives etc ... if I weren't Japanese I would say that Naruto is almost a character in a Chinese story, he only needed to kill senseless and that he finds young It is arrogant teachers, hahaha ........ have a good day I will remove this rating until they tell me that what I said in this comment does not exist in this novel .. sorry if I offended you verti all my hatred for ma series and the garbage fanfics in this comment ....
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