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Traps_Are_Gay
Traps_Are_GayLv144yr
2020-09-29 07:35

It's really hard to continue reading this I love naruto otherwise I wouldn't be reading good or trashy fanfics about it. The mc is an absolute retard who spouts crap out of his a*s. The author is a naruto fanboy who keeps sucking naruto off though out the fic. mc says he doesn't want to change the time line until shippuden and in the same breath says he wants to be "friends" with naruto and not go with pedomaru. The mc even compares sasukes pain to naruto's seriously!? I love both naruto and Sasuke and they both had it rough but wow. Naruto never knew his parents but sasuke's big brother the person he loves most killed the entire clan then his parents in front of him. But that's not all he forced him to relive the scene over and over again. But the mc has the nerve to say if he feels bad imagine what naruto went through!? 😒 shouldn't have expected much. I do wish the author good luck tho

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Skull_King_Brook
Skull_King_BrookLv4

peeps like u are the reason author stopped writing...

Traps_Are_Gay
Traps_Are_GayLv14

I should care why…?

Skull_King_Brook:peeps like u are the reason author stopped writing...
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Founder
FounderLv2

You shouldn't :l I have the same opinion as you as I dropped this around chapter 10 or so

Traps_Are_Gay:I should care why…?
Traps_Are_Gay
Traps_Are_GayLv14

XD I'm dead bro have a good day

Founder:You shouldn't :l I have the same opinion as you as I dropped this around chapter 10 or so
Skull_King_Brook
Skull_King_BrookLv4

Huh.. I just reread this. Now, I don't like it as much :/ But, at least the author tried his best. I may not like it, but the author did try.

Traps_Are_Gay:I should care why…?
Educated
EducatedLv4

Still sucks

Skull_King_Brook:Huh.. I just reread this. Now, I don't like it as much :/ But, at least the author tried his best. I may not like it, but the author did try.
Lucas_21
Lucas_21Lv1

You idiots:v

Eminence_TheGreen
Eminence_TheGreenLv4

this I can understand

Eminence_TheGreen
Eminence_TheGreenLv4

but not really

Eminence_TheGreen:this I can understand
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