Item: Overpwered in the irregular at magic high school
Rating: 1
Author: FrightKnight88

FrightKnight88Lv154yr

2020-08-10 11:25

Author refuses to use proper sentence structure. He doesn't use " to indicate when someone is talking which ruins the dialogue. Comes across as half assed and I refuse to read something half assed.

Overpwered in the irregular at magic high school

GoldenFoxs

Not enough ratings

14 Chs

Liked it!

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GoldenFoxsAuthor

So please don't read it. I already stated that I'm new at this soo go enjoy someone else novel

4yr

FrightKnight88Lv15

Already said I refuse to read it dumbass don't need to repeat to me what I already said I was going to do. Just because you are new at writing a novel doesnt mean you don't know how to write in the first place. And most people who feel they are at a level to start writing usually understand how Dialogue and sentence structure work in the chosen language. So kindly **** off you till you put in the effort necessary for me to eat my words.

GoldenFoxs:So please don't read it. I already stated that I'm new at this soo go enjoy someone else novel

4yr

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