FrightKnight88

Machine translated, or on-par with works of that quality, literally can't understand dialogue. Formatting is dogshit too. It is clear that almost zero effort has gone into this "translation".

oh i am a dingus. Thanks

Raw?

So the mc is just a moron. “I don’t wanna join any organizations “ when literally everything he is worried about would be solved if he accepted. Whatever can’t help people who like Chinese wuxia chances type writing with logic they just love the face slapping underdog type shit even if it doesn’t make any sense

Chapter 1 starts on chapter 7??????

Very good story. Banger number three today for me, i just keep pulling the jackpot on fanfics today. Lots of emotional depth it seems. I just hope it wards off my depression and doesnt lure me into a false sense of security and tricks me into administering another dose. No idea if this is a translated story but its well written and well worded.

Banger number 2 for today, love the mischievous mc. The stories progressing pretty stably so far, Im really hoping the quality of the story stays consistent because if it does I could read it for hundreds of chapters. Im not going to hold any crazy expectations though, because it is a translation and usually I dont have a good track record with them. The translation is baller though, usually translated works that end up on Webnovel, whether paid or not seem to be half assed not only in terms of story but also translation quality. Im glad to say I don't think that if this story ends up disappointing me that the translator will likely have nothing to do with it.

This is such a long prologue

lol based

5,4,4,5,5 I really like this story so far. No idea if its lore accurate, follows the lore, or is completely divested from it, but it doesnt matter. Grammar and story flow is peak. MC's character is extremely mischievous, but not to the point where it detracts from their interactions. MC doesn't actively partake in the world invasions, instead he has been assigning them as assignments to the different archons then rewarding them for conquering said world since he is practically omnipotent within Teyvat as the Heavenly Principle. Conquering these other worlds boosts the lifespan of the world of Teyvat by easing, purifying, or neutralizing harmful substances/elements present in its world. Adds laws/logics for the world to operate on(like the Elden Ring). Adds functions to their existence outside of the Constellation system, such as Reincarnation. Probably more things will be added later to improve the quality of the world of Teyvat but no idea. One thing that doesn't really make sense/ that i dont like was how well he adapted to his position but I wouldn't say it really makes the story worse .