Item: Overpwered in the irregular at magic high school
Rating: 4
Author: LiYao

LiYaoLv74yr

2020-08-18 11:32

its great but you should proof read it first. because some wrong grammar, wrong spelling and some more. i know that it will improve by time. but please edit your chapters until present and may be make some improvement in the plot of your story. or hire an editor or ask a friend who knows or read LN of mahouka so that your in sync with ideals or understand what you write

Overpwered in the irregular at magic high school

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