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Lucifer_Starfall
Lucifer_StarfallLv43yr
2022-02-01 05:32

to author kun wow you are finally back I mean I thought you were going this mythical fanfic, thank god you didn't I truly like your work I mean the previous part was fantastic, yeah there was some impulses here and there but over all its still one of THE BEST fanfic i have ever and by the way I read a lot haha. nevermind the minor things I just hope for the author to never let go of such great piece of art as it would be wast and Will always be one of your biggest Fans HAHAHAHAH. take care Author san.👌

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Sinning_Sovereign
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Haha, hope you're happy to know that after this book, I will be posting about three stories. Two of them separate from this [Heaven Series]. Bowser's Takeover Ben 10: Takeover and the sequel to this where I return to anime and cartoons ATS: Heaven's Return maybe even an extra Marvel: Heaven's Will. I'm stockpiling chapters right now so that I don't have to let you guys down with breaks and all that. None are uploaded right now, so don't try to look for them, haha

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Propendol
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I corrected my review a little (last deleted), it didn't change the essence, but less emotions and more facts. the story itself is quite interesting, if you don't look at the constant development of the same thing. but there is always this "but". and this only destroys all positive emotions, because they are the basis for obtaining the abilities of the main character. and the biggest hole is what's in the last volume (work), what's in the current one. for some reason, everything that the main character merges with his soul manages to disappear somewhere without hurting the soul. and okay, the forces of bloodlines, etc. merged with the soul, but where does his understanding go? the essence, the tao, that he still understood there, and suddenly it turned out that all this needed to be understood in a new way. For example, "after all, he spent thousands of years perfecting his fencing, reached the level of super divine knowledge in which even an ordinary person can cut through a mountain with his sword (which was said in plain text, and then in the same chapter it is shown how he cut an entire planet somewhere in space without using any energies, without even knowing about it, just training ordinary movements) and as a result, in the new world, he does not develop muscle memory for a new body, but develops his skills from the initial level."and what can you call it? explain? no way. do you know why it is not worth reading the previous work? because the main character lost everything he had, everything he supposedly fused into his soul, all the forces that merged with his soul again at the last jerk, all his intentions, skills, and so on. in the end, the main character combined his bloodlines with his soul, they are all inseparable. where are his pedigrees? where is his mastery of weapons? where are his intentions, will, etc.? this is not something material like qi, but its understanding. but they are not there, they have disappeared. it even has bottlenecks appearing in the same places as before. The fencing example above. God, every arch is worse than the last one.

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