I corrected my review a little (last deleted), it didn't change the essence, but less emotions and more facts. the story itself is quite interesting, if you don't look at the constant development of the same thing. but there is always this "but". and this only destroys all positive emotions, because they are the basis for obtaining the abilities of the main character. and the biggest hole is what's in the last volume (work), what's in the current one. for some reason, everything that the main character merges with his soul manages to disappear somewhere without hurting the soul. and okay, the forces of bloodlines, etc. merged with the soul, but where does his understanding go? the essence, the tao, that he still understood there, and suddenly it turned out that all this needed to be understood in a new way. For example, "after all, he spent thousands of years perfecting his fencing, reached the level of super divine knowledge in which even an ordinary person can cut through a mountain with his sword (which was said in plain text, and then in the same chapter it is shown how he cut an entire planet somewhere in space without using any energies, without even knowing about it, just training ordinary movements) and as a result, in the new world, he does not develop muscle memory for a new body, but develops his skills from the initial level."and what can you call it? explain? no way. do you know why it is not worth reading the previous work? because the main character lost everything he had, everything he supposedly fused into his soul, all the forces that merged with his soul again at the last jerk, all his intentions, skills, and so on. in the end, the main character combined his bloodlines with his soul, they are all inseparable. where are his pedigrees? where is his mastery of weapons? where are his intentions, will, etc.? this is not something material like qi, but its understanding. but they are not there, they have disappeared. it even has bottlenecks appearing in the same places as before. The fencing example above. God, every arch is worse than the last one.
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I understand and thank you for telling me. I hope I did explain myself a bit well in the earlier chapters if I had ever mentioned any sealing. I was going for the idea of 'relearning something from scratch and discovering something new you didn't know before' which is why he didn't have Dao, Understanding, Essences, Or his complete Martial Experiences. It was all so that I could have him grow more. Regarding the bloodlines, they are still there, I had a plan for them to come out later in the story. AFTER ALL, there is a HUGE benefit to increase the strength of genes in the bloodlines after all. Like the key component I left in the prequel, where the purest and strongest drops of bloodlines formed the medallion that he kept and pulled out in this sequel. Like the nine-life-cat medallion, I will have this bloodline medallion merge into his body and 'awaken' his bloodlines and have them become stronger than before by increase the strength of their genes. Thank you for pointing this out.
I understand, thank you for reading. But if you can, could you please read what I commented on this review? Thank you.
Crazy_Penguin:This is one of the reason I dropped
I mean...It's okay to forget all that stuff...If like The mc wished for it...Or like forgot It in the first place ..Like It need to have a reason...On why that happened in the first place...Like cause and effect....
I agree but the fanfic wasn’t bad so i imagined mc as a reincarnator
i haven't read the story just the comments but i understand their complaints. take away everything the MC has but dont take away his understanding of something your reader who are really serious with yo work wont understand it at all. There was this cultivation novel i forgot its name in which when a person gets crippled their cultivation they will retain their understanding of laws n able to utilize them meaning not all HOPE is gone
there isn't much reason for decreasing talent and affinity, even if is decreased it will come back up the stronger he gets. with his understanding/comprehension of laws it would have been enough for some safety measures plus his luck. you can seal some powers to keep the body from being destroyed because of having too strong a soul but no one would be able to match him in it, can't use all of it to attack but the defense might as well be impregnable. he can always learn something new by sectioning a part of his knowledge for old and new and temporarily sealing the old ones. what he needs mostly is forging the body to for the soul and training his control over his new body. the new understanding will only make his energies stronger so he has to forge a very good body. the purpose of the multi-versal travel is just to complete the law or make it his strength applicable anywhere. he doesn't really need to scare a horse specially an almost normal one cause he can communicate with them. he just need to make his strength kind of translatable or something. the sealing of his strength just sounds unreasonable the way it's portrayed that it kind of spoils it and brings down the mood. and the story might be better off without the harem that might as well be collectibles, you could just house them and bring them out when all is good than keep them waiting.
