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Sinning_Sovereign
Sinning_SovereignAuthor3yr
2021-10-22 14:05

I'm tired of there not being Fanfics of certain Cultivation Novels, so I will be going ahead and writing some fanfics for them in the future. And yes, I did just give myself a 5 Star review.

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Thigh_Master0124
Thigh_Master0124Lv4

MGA, coiling dragon just recommended

Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

this is good and refreshing , but i think it would be better if it was an independent ff that had nothing to do with sora , so mc heaven , because it 's more fun to see the new mc that has nothing to do with the ff that was made before , it feels all fresh .

Sinning_Sovereign
Sinning_SovereignAuthor

sure, I'll make sure to think about it. Thanks for the suggestion.

Zzz_808:this is good and refreshing , but i think it would be better if it was an independent ff that had nothing to do with sora , so mc heaven , because it 's more fun to see the new mc that has nothing to do with the ff that was made before , it feels all fresh .
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

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Sinning_Sovereign:sure, I'll make sure to think about it. Thanks for the suggestion.
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Propendol
PropendolLv2

I corrected my review a little (last deleted), it didn't change the essence, but less emotions and more facts. the story itself is quite interesting, if you don't look at the constant development of the same thing. but there is always this "but". and this only destroys all positive emotions, because they are the basis for obtaining the abilities of the main character. and the biggest hole is what's in the last volume (work), what's in the current one. for some reason, everything that the main character merges with his soul manages to disappear somewhere without hurting the soul. and okay, the forces of bloodlines, etc. merged with the soul, but where does his understanding go? the essence, the tao, that he still understood there, and suddenly it turned out that all this needed to be understood in a new way. For example, "after all, he spent thousands of years perfecting his fencing, reached the level of super divine knowledge in which even an ordinary person can cut through a mountain with his sword (which was said in plain text, and then in the same chapter it is shown how he cut an entire planet somewhere in space without using any energies, without even knowing about it, just training ordinary movements) and as a result, in the new world, he does not develop muscle memory for a new body, but develops his skills from the initial level."and what can you call it? explain? no way. do you know why it is not worth reading the previous work? because the main character lost everything he had, everything he supposedly fused into his soul, all the forces that merged with his soul again at the last jerk, all his intentions, skills, and so on. in the end, the main character combined his bloodlines with his soul, they are all inseparable. where are his pedigrees? where is his mastery of weapons? where are his intentions, will, etc.? this is not something material like qi, but its understanding. but they are not there, they have disappeared. it even has bottlenecks appearing in the same places as before. The fencing example above. God, every arch is worse than the last one.

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