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When did such clothes become cool and impressive? God, besides the Chinese, is there also the pathos and coolness coming from a child with eighth-grader syndrome? It was clear before, but it wasn't that dumb.

what a bloody mess, thermal vision comes from the word heat, when hit, the blood evaporates, the slice is fried to a crisp. there simply cannot be a "mess".

The main character is a whiner, all the characters are the same, as if they are controlled by a central mind. the jokes are not funny and from the last point we conclude that all the characters have the same humor. I don't know how to proceed, but the first ~ 100 chapters are just a repetition of the original plot with the addition of a more "cool" main character who does everything 100 times better than Captain America, but this does not affect the plot in any way.

A whiner. For such characters, the best golden finger in rebirth is a complete loss of memory about a past life. the humor is also very strange, while for some reason it is the same for all the characters.

the writing style is disgusting. permanent me, my, I, mine. He, they. In this chapter, the "my" alone is repeated 40 times. and almost as many times the "me" is repeated, sometimes several times per paragraph.

if you hadn't led a life of "shit floating in an ice hole" for fifteen hundred years, but honed your skills, there would definitely be no problems with several ordinary vampires. they were the oldest vampires in the film, at the beginning of the third millennium. and now they are just born vampires, because according to history, Amun was born somewhere in 2500 BC.

yeah, well, a smart guy. ie 10 million people of the population who give 0.03-0.05 per person, according to the author, bring less points than a deadly fight with the Hulk? even 1% of the population will bring ten times more points than he received for all these useless gestures.

nonsense, the author just pours a sea of water, encounters with useless characters, overcoming, conscious entry into life-threatening situations for the sake of getting several hundred points. especially killed the phrase of this smart guy (just the opposite) after the fight with the Hulk, that even such a meeting gives more points than scraping from ordinary people who give 0.03-0.05 per person. although if he is such a "popular" thief about whom the most famous newspapers write and news channels tell. then with one news about him, he should earn tens or even hundreds of thousands of points. there are ~10 million people in New York, if after the news at least 100 thousand people arrive at 0.03, he will earn much more than for all the useless meetings with subsequent weaklings called "superheroes" by misunderstanding

smoke itself is a weak ability. it becomes strong only by adding third-party tools. unless, of course, he can produce smoke with different properties without using third-party equipment for this, which I doubt. from this it turns out that you are constantly dependent on the environment and improvised means.

But Xiao Yang hasn't reincarnated yet, he's not even in the plans yet