Propendol

I’ve only read about five chapters so far, but it’s already obvious that the author doesn’t understand what they’re writing about. The characters and items are absolutely not at the power level they’re supposed to be. The One Ring, which contains a large portion of Sauron’s power (essentially a god), ends up being just a ring of invisibility (and invisibility itself is basically a minor side ability, same as extended lifespan). The author even gives characters techniques that are used by supers specifically because of their innate power. Like Canary Cry (which is simply a technique, comparable to a karate strike from a mechanic’s arm — a derivative of raw power), or Tsunade’s healing (which is essentially a seal). How is anyone supposed to use abilities that rely on a specific power source or special energy? For example, levitation in Harry Potter requires both a wand and magic. Nami is rated at 3 stars, and Johnny Cage — who canonically fights actual gods — is also rated at 3 stars. Meanwhile, a demigod is somehow rated at 4 stars. And so on, and so forth. On top of that, the characters themselves and the dialogues are extremely poorly written. Is it really that hard to study the lore of items, characters, and worlds — or just not include them in the text at all?

When did such clothes become cool and impressive? God, besides the Chinese, is there also the pathos and coolness coming from a child with eighth-grader syndrome? It was clear before, but it wasn't that dumb.

what a bloody mess, thermal vision comes from the word heat, when hit, the blood evaporates, the slice is fried to a crisp. there simply cannot be a "mess".

The main character is a whiner, all the characters are the same, as if they are controlled by a central mind. the jokes are not funny and from the last point we conclude that all the characters have the same humor. I don't know how to proceed, but the first ~ 100 chapters are just a repetition of the original plot with the addition of a more "cool" main character who does everything 100 times better than Captain America, but this does not affect the plot in any way.

A whiner. For such characters, the best golden finger in rebirth is a complete loss of memory about a past life. the humor is also very strange, while for some reason it is the same for all the characters.

the writing style is disgusting. permanent me, my, I, mine. He, they. In this chapter, the "my" alone is repeated 40 times. and almost as many times the "me" is repeated, sometimes several times per paragraph.

if you hadn't led a life of "shit floating in an ice hole" for fifteen hundred years, but honed your skills, there would definitely be no problems with several ordinary vampires. they were the oldest vampires in the film, at the beginning of the third millennium. and now they are just born vampires, because according to history, Amun was born somewhere in 2500 BC.

yeah, well, a smart guy. ie 10 million people of the population who give 0.03-0.05 per person, according to the author, bring less points than a deadly fight with the Hulk? even 1% of the population will bring ten times more points than he received for all these useless gestures.

nonsense, the author just pours a sea of water, encounters with useless characters, overcoming, conscious entry into life-threatening situations for the sake of getting several hundred points. especially killed the phrase of this smart guy (just the opposite) after the fight with the Hulk, that even such a meeting gives more points than scraping from ordinary people who give 0.03-0.05 per person. although if he is such a "popular" thief about whom the most famous newspapers write and news channels tell. then with one news about him, he should earn tens or even hundreds of thousands of points. there are ~10 million people in New York, if after the news at least 100 thousand people arrive at 0.03, he will earn much more than for all the useless meetings with subsequent weaklings called "superheroes" by misunderstanding

smoke itself is a weak ability. it becomes strong only by adding third-party tools. unless, of course, he can produce smoke with different properties without using third-party equipment for this, which I doubt. from this it turns out that you are constantly dependent on the environment and improvised means.