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DamnPlotArmorAuthor4yr
2020-07-31 07:21

Due to the recent toxic comment(s) from a handful of readers (or an alt from a hater), it has come to me that some readers might have misunderstood the concept of this novel. Therefore, I'm putting this review as a disclaimer, so these readers who are expecting a certain type of MC or a type of story can understand what they are getting into. And then, when they start flaming, I can just remind them of their ignorance. What you will NOT see in this novel. 1. Fast-paced story 2. OP MC at the beginning of the story 3. Unyielding MC that refuses to bow down to anyone. 4. An evil MC that violates laws and order at the early story. 5. A Mary Sue, Gary Stu, Kirito-like MC that infinitely gains instant powerup without having to work hard. 6. An alpha MC that has a perfect personality and makes perfect decisions in every action. 7. A ruthless, reckless, and brainless MC that goes around and provoke everyone left and right because of a trivial matter. 8. Humorless dark story. What you will SEE in this novel. 1. Slow-paced story. 2. An MC that understands these words and can put them into practice; "Compromise", "Tactical Retreat", "Surrender", "Mutual Interest and Benefit", and "Politics" 3. MC with a brain, but it fails to function properly sometimes, especially when his dick takes over. 4. MC NTRing other protagonists. 5. Plot twists. 6. Hard-working but mental MC 7. A semi-useless system, but it forces MC to work hard. 8. Toned down mature scenes. 9. Memes and Jojo References 10. THOTS, Mind-Breaking, Mind-Controlling, HAREMS. 11. Weak-to-Strong MC 12. Moderately Stupid-to-Military Genius MC 13. VILLAIN =/= EVIL 14. Protagonist =/= GOOD I hope this would clarify the tone of this story. I'll edit this when there are changes. In summary, to those readers that motherf-ckingly claimed that they are here looking for an evil mc and got disappointed when they found a mature MC with a politic face, they can just F off. Now, I've warned you. You can roast me with your almighty insights, my dear trolls. I welcome all constructive criticisms that points out my mistakes, flaws, inconsistency, and advice on what I can do better. But personal attacks, toxic comments, and flaming will be instantly deleted.

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FrightKnight88Lv14

Your pp small...my pp average...who's the troll now? Jk I'll give ur story a go fam

Venom_GodLv12

im okay with ur story but what's with the THOTS, is the mc women used tools or something

DamnPlotArmorAuthor

Thots = gold diggers, prostitutes, and S word

Venom_God:im okay with ur story but what's with the THOTS, is the mc women used tools or something
Venom_GodLv12

so mc is going after prostitutes too, sigh

DamnPlotArmor:Thots = gold diggers, prostitutes, and S word
Max255Lv6

Desperate times needs desperate measures

Venom_God:so mc is going after prostitutes too, sigh
akshay22Lv5

😂🤣😂😂😂😂

Max255:Desperate times needs desperate measures
Nikhil_ChandLv4

What will be the level of smut? I mean what % of content will it cover/? Is it 7 out of 10 chapters or 3-4 chapters every 20 chapters? I like everything that you wrote in this post(it looks very logical and reasonable and practical) except the point 10 which has mind breaking and mind controlling part...... well i just need to put up with it if i want to read. Unless the plot goes down the hill i might tolerate these elements coz seriously speaking it reminds me of hentai

DamnPlotArmorAuthor

The smut part will be minimal as it is for fan-service, not the main plot. I'd say 6-7 chapters in every 20 chapters, but those smut chapters won't take the entire chapter. It will be there in a few paragraphs here and there. Mind Breaking + Mind Controlling will be there, but the victims are not innocent maidens. The victims are mostly evil girls that either had tried to harm MC or had stained their hands with blood. Miaomiao won't be completely evil, but he won't be a good guy either. You can say he's neutral in all the mess.

Nikhil_Chand:What will be the level of smut? I mean what % of content will it cover/? Is it 7 out of 10 chapters or 3-4 chapters every 20 chapters? I like everything that you wrote in this post(it looks very logical and reasonable and practical) except the point 10 which has mind breaking and mind controlling part...... well i just need to put up with it if i want to read. Unless the plot goes down the hill i might tolerate these elements coz seriously speaking it reminds me of hentai
Nikhil_ChandLv4

Nice to know.... Good then this novel looks very good from the points written in the post, almost an ideal novel

DamnPlotArmor:The smut part will be minimal as it is for fan-service, not the main plot. I'd say 6-7 chapters in every 20 chapters, but those smut chapters won't take the entire chapter. It will be there in a few paragraphs here and there. Mind Breaking + Mind Controlling will be there, but the victims are not innocent maidens. The victims are mostly evil girls that either had tried to harm MC or had stained their hands with blood. Miaomiao won't be completely evil, but he won't be a good guy either. You can say he's neutral in all the mess.
ArchbishopOfSlothLv10

ok from your Review. I already regard as this my favourite novel. I really need another protagonist's Heroine mind break. I hope your novel follow like 'Sinful life of Emperor ' of this site

holson_CharlesLv15

ouf thanks author for clarification,, now i don't have to waste my time to read it...

HeavenlyHellLv14

Will MC tend towards more chaotic neutral, lawfull neutral? also i know its not really the place, but what happened to your other story/when will you resume it if at all?

DamnPlotArmor:The smut part will be minimal as it is for fan-service, not the main plot. I'd say 6-7 chapters in every 20 chapters, but those smut chapters won't take the entire chapter. It will be there in a few paragraphs here and there. Mind Breaking + Mind Controlling will be there, but the victims are not innocent maidens. The victims are mostly evil girls that either had tried to harm MC or had stained their hands with blood. Miaomiao won't be completely evil, but he won't be a good guy either. You can say he's neutral in all the mess.
DamnPlotArmorAuthor

In the current chapters, (Chapter 30-40) Chaotic Neutral. However, his character will slowly change due to the development in the future. Battle Royale of the Sinners is completed, but Lilim Heritage Online is on hiatus. Ugly Duckling in Three Kingdoms won't be resumed any time soon until this novel is completed. I'll resume the story when I manage to rewrite the entire outline. There was an accident on my computer, and I lost the manuscript and outline of the latter's story five months ago. So, I decided to finish my first story and try to resume the whole thing by slowly figuring out the lost outline. Once the outline and the preparation have been completed, I'll resume Lilim Heritage Online.

HeavenlyHell:Will MC tend towards more chaotic neutral, lawfull neutral? also i know its not really the place, but what happened to your other story/when will you resume it if at all?
HermitFromMtTaiLv3

Poor ass going for prostitutes.

Venom_God:so mc is going after prostitutes too, sigh
Venom_GodLv12

And gold diggers and probably some other hoes so im not gonna read

HermitFromMtTai:Poor ass going for prostitutes.
RaLegacyLv12

Don't know how I feel about the MC being "mental", or him having a "semi-useless system", but besides that it looks like a good read. I'll check it out.

newthingsLv6

im gonna read till his system starts giving him impossible missions!

Pumpkin26Lv3

I don't mc that think with his dick he's reminded me of yun Che from the against the god its trash so this novel is trash to me

I_am_speedLv3

Just a question I don’t mind ntr if the person deserves it. If the person getting cucked is a nice guy I don’t really like it I understand that it makes for good story if done well but I’d still like to know. If that is the case I’ll still probably read and only stop reading if it really isn’t enjoyable for me

DamnPlotArmorAuthor

There will be surprising elements and hidden dark sides of every protagonist's characters. As I stated before, plot twists will be in play.

I_am_speed:Just a question I don’t mind ntr if the person deserves it. If the person getting cucked is a nice guy I don’t really like it I understand that it makes for good story if done well but I’d still like to know. If that is the case I’ll still probably read and only stop reading if it really isn’t enjoyable for me
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